Daughter
She has my heart8 total reviews
Comment from WriterHeather
This is such a beautiful tribute to your daughters. I'm sure this peice means a lot to them. I could feel the senserity in your words. I believe this will do extremely well in the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020
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This is such a beautiful tribute to your daughters. I'm sure this peice means a lot to them. I could feel the senserity in your words. I believe this will do extremely well in the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 24-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for this 6 star review. I have the most amazing daughters, I'm very lucky. :)
Comment from AprilViolet
What a beautiful poem. It sounds like your daughters are just as lucky to have you as their mom. You must have raised them right and im sure they are just as proud of you! Six stars!
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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What a beautiful poem. It sounds like your daughters are just as lucky to have you as their mom. You must have raised them right and im sure they are just as proud of you! Six stars!
Comment Written 23-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful review...you made my week. :)
Comment from donette1914
so touching and so loving on how beautiful your daughter mean to you
your words are a good choice to enhance your well pinned poem
the photo went perfect to make this come to life
believable and you have so much talent
it was a pleasure to read your work
thank you for sharing
I hope the best in the contest
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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so touching and so loving on how beautiful your daughter mean to you
your words are a good choice to enhance your well pinned poem
the photo went perfect to make this come to life
believable and you have so much talent
it was a pleasure to read your work
thank you for sharing
I hope the best in the contest
Comment Written 23-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful review, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from RodG
This sonnet is a lovely tribute from an aging mother to her grown-up daughter. We clearly see how their roles have changed, and daughter's love and succor give Mother strength. One minor suggestion: in line 8 change "that" to "who." Rod
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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This sonnet is a lovely tribute from an aging mother to her grown-up daughter. We clearly see how their roles have changed, and daughter's love and succor give Mother strength. One minor suggestion: in line 8 change "that" to "who." Rod
Comment Written 23-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful review and your helpful suggestion. I changed it for the better! Thanks again. :)
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a beautiful tribute to your daughters. It is filled with love. The words flow well with good rhymes. Readers see/feel the true meaning of love between you and your daughters as your life comes full circle. The image is fitting. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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This is a beautiful tribute to your daughters. It is filled with love. The words flow well with good rhymes. Readers see/feel the true meaning of love between you and your daughters as your life comes full circle. The image is fitting. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 23-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Thank you for this very nice review. :)
Comment from AnnieDawn
What a beautiful tribute to your daughters. They are the salt of the earth and I have one just like yours. They don't get enough credit for all they do for us moms and I appreciate the way you have written about yours. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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What a beautiful tribute to your daughters. They are the salt of the earth and I have one just like yours. They don't get enough credit for all they do for us moms and I appreciate the way you have written about yours. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem. I have three daughters and I wrote this for all of them, they really look out for me. Thanks again.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the sentiments here and daughters are such a treasure and I am lucky to have two. You have used a different meter for your poem here to the traditional iambic and I hope this is allowed for the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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I enjoyed the sentiments here and daughters are such a treasure and I am lucky to have two. You have used a different meter for your poem here to the traditional iambic and I hope this is allowed for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Thank you for reading. I'm not sure I've learned that meter yet..lol. I do love sonnets though, even if I don't write them correctly. Thanks again for taking time to read my poem.
Comment from Wendy G
What a beautiful poem, so meaningful and so well-written. This is a fine tribute to your daughter, showing how precious she is. The time and love you invested in her has returned to you. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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What a beautiful poem, so meaningful and so well-written. This is a fine tribute to your daughter, showing how precious she is. The time and love you invested in her has returned to you. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this great review.