Comment from tempeste

Exceptional

Ciao Poet!

The art choice is mesmerising .. and complements your lovely poem ..

Three awesome ways to describe our beloved sun .. the first and last are my favourite :

Hot bolt and life bringer

..I'm going to take a pic with my iPhone and make your entry my opening screen wallpaper .

Ciao!

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020

Thanks so much! Much appreciated! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem! Stay safe! Stay indoors! Peace to you!

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

The wonderful star of life and beach-time burns - LOL! ;) Thanx for sharing your take on this limited format and best of luck at the polls today! ;)

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem! I hope I win. I'm crossing my fingers!

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

You packed volumes in this three lines. What a magnificent artwork of the sun. You describe it well with your words.

Great imagery, visuals and artwork.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020

Thanks! I hope that I win! I'm crossing my fingers! I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

You've written a very good 3-5-3 poem for the contest about nature
with excellent imagery and good choice of photograph.
My one suggestion would be that lines two and three say essentially the same thing with everlasting/lasts all-time.
I'd change the last line to: life bringer or something similar.
Good luck in the contest.
Roberty

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020

Thanks! I have fixed the mistake. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem!