Renga Multi-Author Book
Viewing comments for Prologue "Streams..."Renga is a Japanese linked poetry 5/7/5 and 7/7
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Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Awesome writing. Streams flow Washing desert sand. Grains will grow where nothing grew. Nicely done. I absolutely love your photo the vibrant colours jump out at you.
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Awesome writing. Streams flow Washing desert sand. Grains will grow where nothing grew. Nicely done. I absolutely love your photo the vibrant colours jump out at you.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Thanks Joanne, for these terrific comments and this great review, Roy
Comment from judiverse
I love that picture. It's a beautiful thought to think of something growing where nothing has grown before. It's interesting to think how grains of desert sand can flow from streams. This will be a wonderful addition to the Renga book. There must be quite a collection by now. judi
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I love that picture. It's a beautiful thought to think of something growing where nothing has grown before. It's interesting to think how grains of desert sand can flow from streams. This will be a wonderful addition to the Renga book. There must be quite a collection by now. judi
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Thanks judy, for these excellent comments and review, Roy
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You're very welcome. Trying to get caught up on reviewing today. judi
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Well done
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Thanks a bunch. judi
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My pleasure Judy
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My pleasure Judy
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You're very welcome. judi
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You're welcome. judi
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written couplet about the stream washing the desert sand and will be left where nothing will grow or had grew.
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A very well-written couplet about the stream washing the desert sand and will be left where nothing will grow or had grew.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Thanks Sandra, for these excellent comments and review, Roy
Comment from lyenochka
Great use of alliteration of "s" and "g" words in your couplet! I'm wondering which poem preceded yours.
Your poem echoes Scripture to me that "streams flow washing desert sands" just like the Lord will restore and refresh and cause to grow even where nothing grew before!
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Great use of alliteration of "s" and "g" words in your couplet! I'm wondering which poem preceded yours.
Your poem echoes Scripture to me that "streams flow washing desert sands" just like the Lord will restore and refresh and cause to grow even where nothing grew before!
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Thanks Helen, for these fantastic comments and review, Roy
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Love the flow of the storms of water from the previous chapter to yours that nourish the desert sands -- wonderful continuity yet each so original!! ;) Thanx for sharing your contribution, Roy! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Love the flow of the storms of water from the previous chapter to yours that nourish the desert sands -- wonderful continuity yet each so original!! ;) Thanx for sharing your contribution, Roy! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
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Thanks to your fabulous post dear Yvette, your a genius, blessings Roy
Comment from Lucy de Welles
This is really deep, Roy. And ever so beautiful in every way. "Grains will grow" is a very interesting concept. Never even heard of it, let alone thought of it. Will chew on it for awhile! What can grow out of a grain of sand? Hum ........
Just lovely addition to renga book.
Lucy
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This is really deep, Roy. And ever so beautiful in every way. "Grains will grow" is a very interesting concept. Never even heard of it, let alone thought of it. Will chew on it for awhile! What can grow out of a grain of sand? Hum ........
Just lovely addition to renga book.
Lucy
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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The grains are ambiguous dear girl, thanks for this magnificent review, blessing for your generosity, blessings Roy
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I think they may be prophetic. Need to sleep on it....
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You perceived well
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Lovely! I see you took on the added challenge of an internal rhyme of flow and grow--alliteration in GR as well as S and W--wonder what strain of grain (see, I can rhyme too!) can grow in a well-watered desert.
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Lovely! I see you took on the added challenge of an internal rhyme of flow and grow--alliteration in GR as well as S and W--wonder what strain of grain (see, I can rhyme too!) can grow in a well-watered desert.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
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Hah hah well done Liz, beautiful review, thanks Roy
Comment from l.raven
Hi Roy, your poem reminds me of when Volcanos over flow with lava...and years later...the lava starts to grow green...
same as fires...
you can't stop mother nation my sweet friend...where God wants life to grow...it's going to...I love your poem you...and love the picture...very nicely written...love Linda xxoo
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Hi Roy, your poem reminds me of when Volcanos over flow with lava...and years later...the lava starts to grow green...
same as fires...
you can't stop mother nation my sweet friend...where God wants life to grow...it's going to...I love your poem you...and love the picture...very nicely written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Thanks so much dear Linda, for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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your so welcome sweet guy...blessings to you as well...love xxoo
Comment from DeboraDyess
Even when you're not writing a poem of hope, you're writing a poem of hope! I love that the rain turns a barren place into a place of harvest! (God's blessings in our lives, perhaps? â?¤)
Well done! my friend. this is a perfect addition to the book.
Blessings,
Deb
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Even when you're not writing a poem of hope, you're writing a poem of hope! I love that the rain turns a barren place into a place of harvest! (God's blessings in our lives, perhaps? â?¤)
Well done! my friend. this is a perfect addition to the book.
Blessings,
Deb
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Thanks so much Deb, for these excellent comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
That is a spectacular picture Roy and your fine words are a great contribute to the Renga book. It is amazing how nature can grow in places we never thought possible, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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That is a spectacular picture Roy and your fine words are a great contribute to the Renga book. It is amazing how nature can grow in places we never thought possible, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Thanks Dolly, for these special comments and review, blessings Roy