Reviews from

Fun Words

How many can you use in one poem?

13 total reviews 
Comment from Mistydawn
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Those are some fun words to read, pronounce. To use them in a poem and have them all make sense, I'm very impressed. Your poem is well-written, very interesting, a fun read.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
    Thank you my dear and for all those glittering stars! =]
Comment from CrystieCookie999
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

This is a fun read. It has words which one hears once in a great while, maybe in older children's books. But in our house we all know what 'persnickety' means, because of the presence of three cats, ha. Just a little fix:
ordindary trollop
I think you mean: ordinary

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
    Thank you for the fix, I click on the wrong spell check word. =] Thanks so much. I am very persnickety about my spelling. =]
Comment from Shirley McLain
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

What a fun poem to read and the amazing thing is the story made perfect sense to me. I don't use flummoxed or Kerfuffle. You did a great job with no errors found. Have a great day. Shirley

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much. =] It was very fun to write.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

How clever and creative and difficult to pull off.
I enjoyed this and you did a good job to put all these words into a poem.
This was fun to read.
Regards,
Mary


 Comment Written 23-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much. It was fun. =]
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

A very well-written poem about having fun with funny sounding sounds to begin with and a few seems to have an international meaning that can be used in any language.

 Comment Written 23-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
    Thank you Sandra. =]
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

You tackled a challenging but creative topic for this piece. It is excellent--vividly descriptive, entertaining, and amusing. In using all the words, you stayed on track and created a full plot for your narrative. (Line 8, typo--changed)

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
    Yes I need to fix my typo, I'm very persnickety about my spelling. =]
    Thanks so much and for all the beautiful stars. =]
Comment from L. Kalere
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Well you took this challenge seriously and covered all bases, which was a very clever approach. The rhyming is good, even with some very difficult words. It's very funny and a joy to read.

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much. It was fun. =]
Comment from Sally Law
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I promise to give this a swat. You did a splendid job, Rox. I sat as a Jury's Foreman for a man who had been bamboozled by a repair shop. The poor guy won. It was nice to be on his side. Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs.....

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
    Good for you. Always nice to see the good guys win. Thanks so much my dear.
Comment from Ulla
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Hi Rox, I liked this great little poem trying to use all those funny words. I think you did admirably so. Pumpernickel is a German very dark rye bread. It's sour sweet and bitter all at the same time. It's very firm and thinly sliced A fifth of an inch and is almost black in colour. It's often eaten with cheese. I don't like it. I love rye bread which I have daily but not 'pumpernickel'
I think the joke would be you are a mischievous little guy with a dark but funny soul. Does that make sense?
You've written a great poem. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much my dear. I do at times have a dark, but always funny soul. =]
Comment from blondie560
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Very clever! The list of words sounds like the new words that are accepted into the dictionary. They just catch on. So some of these go back decades. I enjoyed how you kept the story clear while using the words. I'm not sure on the pumpernickel either and it doesn't sound like it would be much of a weapon lol!

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
    Pumpernickle was a strange one, but it is very dense so it could make a good weapon. =] Thank you so much for all the beautiful stars.