First Love
Young Love...5 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker
Nice photo, Rhonnie. This is a very sweet poem. I also love all of your verses from the Bible. I stole a kiss from an older boy in Catholic grade school when I was 6 years old (he was eight), and my home room nun yelled at me profusely. I was too young to paddle according to school rules, but those weren't my dad's rules and I found that out when I got home from school that day. Lol
You're a really great writer, Rhonnie. Good luck with all your writing. I'm waiting for your next post.
Your friend, Cindy
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Nice photo, Rhonnie. This is a very sweet poem. I also love all of your verses from the Bible. I stole a kiss from an older boy in Catholic grade school when I was 6 years old (he was eight), and my home room nun yelled at me profusely. I was too young to paddle according to school rules, but those weren't my dad's rules and I found that out when I got home from school that day. Lol
You're a really great writer, Rhonnie. Good luck with all your writing. I'm waiting for your next post.
Your friend, Cindy
Comment Written 18-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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HELLO CINDY: I thank you for your review. As usual...you are appreciated. Cindy, what happened to your pretty smiling face? Somehow it just disappeared. I like seeing your smile, Cindy. Please, if you can...put it back out here. I miss seeing you. God bless you, Cindy. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from equestrik
This is a very innocent and sweet entry for the 'Love Poem Poety' contest. Love the complete presentation as well as your well chosen words. Best of luck.
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This is a very innocent and sweet entry for the 'Love Poem Poety' contest. Love the complete presentation as well as your well chosen words. Best of luck.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
Comment from lancellot
Hmm, very nice, but I think that depends on the type of love. Some types requires maturity to understand. Love, is a powerful force. But like any power, it requires understanding and responsibility of its use. Without that it can be a danger to oneself or others.
Good poem, very thought provoking.
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Hmm, very nice, but I think that depends on the type of love. Some types requires maturity to understand. Love, is a powerful force. But like any power, it requires understanding and responsibility of its use. Without that it can be a danger to oneself or others.
Good poem, very thought provoking.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
Comment from Bill Schott
This love poem, But We Are Adam and Eve, presented as a 5-7-5, acknowledges that love is open to all and that when it occurs, it should be accepted.
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This love poem, But We Are Adam and Eve, presented as a 5-7-5, acknowledges that love is open to all and that when it occurs, it should be accepted.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020
Comment from Cynthia Adams1
This is a very sweet and true poem.
The artwork is precious.
Of course, you are right...love is meant for all peoples, of all ages, it just is meant to vary in the way it's done according to age.
Your poem made me smile.
Whatever happens in the world, life and love go on.
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This is a very sweet and true poem.
The artwork is precious.
Of course, you are right...love is meant for all peoples, of all ages, it just is meant to vary in the way it's done according to age.
Your poem made me smile.
Whatever happens in the world, life and love go on.
Comment Written 17-Oct-2020