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Comment from Sugarray77
As I read through your verse...Clarify Me God's Words, I thought your poem is full of questions and observations about our God. It struck home to me how many different ways there are for us to see and understand Him. I pray that His peace and serenity permeate your day.
Melissa
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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As I read through your verse...Clarify Me God's Words, I thought your poem is full of questions and observations about our God. It struck home to me how many different ways there are for us to see and understand Him. I pray that His peace and serenity permeate your day.
Melissa
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the read, this feedback and good wishes.
Comment from karenina
There are true believers and there are charlatans...you make that distinction clearly and with an astute eye on those who would bully us into believing in falsehoods--or disbelieving that the one true holy God existed! You certainly seemed to meet all qualifications for this contest and I wish you the best with your entry!--Karenina
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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There are true believers and there are charlatans...you make that distinction clearly and with an astute eye on those who would bully us into believing in falsehoods--or disbelieving that the one true holy God existed! You certainly seemed to meet all qualifications for this contest and I wish you the best with your entry!--Karenina
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you for this great righteous review and good wishes.
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Thank you! I enjoyed your work!--Karenina
Comment from TPAC
I found this a very interesting read, filled with many captivating aspects about faith, questioning realities playing role upon a throne rendering judgement. The answer my friend is blowing in the wind.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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I found this a very interesting read, filled with many captivating aspects about faith, questioning realities playing role upon a throne rendering judgement. The answer my friend is blowing in the wind.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you for this great review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic poem, Clarify Me God's Words, vertically formatted with the similar expression, tells a truth that God's punishment and praise comes at His time and with great authority. God's justice is not swift, but eternal.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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This acrostic poem, Clarify Me God's Words, vertically formatted with the similar expression, tells a truth that God's punishment and praise comes at His time and with great authority. God's justice is not swift, but eternal.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there,
Another very interesting poem. Do you write your poem first and then create the prompt for the contest?
Creating the name of the poem to fit into the limited space given for the Title is part of the process. Perhaps you could challenge yourself to do this.
Good luck in your contest,
~Mustang Patty~
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Hi there,
Another very interesting poem. Do you write your poem first and then create the prompt for the contest?
Creating the name of the poem to fit into the limited space given for the Title is part of the process. Perhaps you could challenge yourself to do this.
Good luck in your contest,
~Mustang Patty~
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Heaven is for sacred, religious killer-warriors, and divine war-mongers ... A place in Heaven is reserved for murderers and war-mongers, Doc? That's a rather different take on Heaven than I've been taught. Are you referring to wars such as those the Templar Knights and Crusaders waged--or Holy Wars, like caliphate? ...
I don't know who it is you have in your hip pocket that always awards you sixes for these things.
I can barely make heads or tails of just exactly what it is you're attempting to say.
God bless,
~Dean
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Heaven is for sacred, religious killer-warriors, and divine war-mongers ... A place in Heaven is reserved for murderers and war-mongers, Doc? That's a rather different take on Heaven than I've been taught. Are you referring to wars such as those the Templar Knights and Crusaders waged--or Holy Wars, like caliphate? ...
I don't know who it is you have in your hip pocket that always awards you sixes for these things.
I can barely make heads or tails of just exactly what it is you're attempting to say.
God bless,
~Dean
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thank you, please read the stanza hope you will get your answers to the questions:
Wise fool, self-declared, self-taught fake preachers, and canvassers of God
Interpret God a 'deaf-dumb-blind' God among some fanatic followers
They tell, God awards justice only to the liars, criminals and cruel men
Heaven is for sacred, religious killer-warriors, and divine war-mongers
This line is the viewpoint of the wise fool, self-declared, self-taught fake preachers, and canvassers of God; they say that Heaven is the sacred, religious killer-warriors, and divine war-mongers, because the whole stanza is related line by line, and you have not taken into consideration of their view about heaven.
Hope, I have clarified the point.
This is not to teach or advise you, but this is true that in a stanza a writer cannot mention every time who is speaking what every time in every line, previous lines should be related to the lines followed.
Thank you for pointing out this and I think as a wise reader you can follow the worth of the line spoken by the fake canvassers of God.
With regards
Alcreator
PS If you have any further doubts, you may ask me for clarification, I shall be glad to clarify you ever
Thanking you once again for offering your wise view and honest expression of your opinion
Wish you every success in your chosen goal
And best of luck
Alcreator
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Thank you for taking time out to clarify that for me, Alcreator.
My rating has been adjusted accordingly.
God bless,
~Dean
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Thank you very much.
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You're more than welcome.
Comment from tfawcus
Interesting clarification of beliefs here. Mankind has often justified unchristian acts in the name of Christ. One needs to go beyond the schisms and sects to find the true meaning of God's Word.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Interesting clarification of beliefs here. Mankind has often justified unchristian acts in the name of Christ. One needs to go beyond the schisms and sects to find the true meaning of God's Word.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from WryWriter
"Walk Talk With God Clarify Me Gods Words" acrostic poetic work. My favorite lines: Make me clear, why I believe, God can do everything for everyone. Earnestly, why God entertains no reviews of His justice immediately. I believe God speaks to/does for the individual as we are all not the same. Enjoyed!
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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"Walk Talk With God Clarify Me Gods Words" acrostic poetic work. My favorite lines: Make me clear, why I believe, God can do everything for everyone. Earnestly, why God entertains no reviews of His justice immediately. I believe God speaks to/does for the individual as we are all not the same. Enjoyed!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you for this appreciative review.
Comment from sfharper
Impressive use of acrostic form to illustrate your title poem words, and to showcase how each piece works to add up to the whole. Good use of rhyme. Good twist and the second to last stanza, opening up to the final conclusion. I enjoyed reading it.
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Impressive use of acrostic form to illustrate your title poem words, and to showcase how each piece works to add up to the whole. Good use of rhyme. Good twist and the second to last stanza, opening up to the final conclusion. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
Comment from Randa Dayle
Wonderful................ Beautiul........... Gracious.........
I loved it, what a wonderful tribute to our Lord. Congrats on becoming a recognized writer. Good job, and keep on writing!
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Wonderful................ Beautiul........... Gracious.........
I loved it, what a wonderful tribute to our Lord. Congrats on becoming a recognized writer. Good job, and keep on writing!
Comment Written 23-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you for this great review.