God Speaks
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Comment from Janet Foor
God has graced you to walk and talk with Him is a powerful message of faith.
I enjoyed reading your free verse acrostic poem this afternoon.s
Beautifully done.
Blessings
Janet
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God has graced you to walk and talk with Him is a powerful message of faith.
I enjoyed reading your free verse acrostic poem this afternoon.s
Beautifully done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
Comment from Sugarray77
Dr.... you have written a very good and unique free verse poem. Your use of the acrostic poetic form is well done and perfectly executed. Great job on this poem.
Melissa
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Dr.... you have written a very good and unique free verse poem. Your use of the acrostic poetic form is well done and perfectly executed. Great job on this poem.
Melissa
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
Comment from Gloria ....
Nice to see you writing a free verse ALD. Your word choices are fine and you've left an uplifting message.
My only "complaint" is it is too didactic and offers no personal account and experience from the poet. In my opinion poetry should be personal or it runs the risk of preaching rather than communicating.
Much enjoyed my friend. :)
Gloria
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Nice to see you writing a free verse ALD. Your word choices are fine and you've left an uplifting message.
My only "complaint" is it is too didactic and offers no personal account and experience from the poet. In my opinion poetry should be personal or it runs the risk of preaching rather than communicating.
Much enjoyed my friend. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautiful free verse that certainly and rightly puts God as our companion through all that we do -- thank you so very much for sharing such a powerful witness! ;) :)
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A beautiful free verse that certainly and rightly puts God as our companion through all that we do -- thank you so very much for sharing such a powerful witness! ;) :)
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
Comment from rheabug
This free verse poem was nicely put together for the reviewer to enjoy. Thank you for sharing your knowledge with us here at fanstory. The picture you chose to accompany your post is perfect. Good job and keep writing with your creative pen. Hugs
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This free verse poem was nicely put together for the reviewer to enjoy. Thank you for sharing your knowledge with us here at fanstory. The picture you chose to accompany your post is perfect. Good job and keep writing with your creative pen. Hugs
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
Comment from LanceHill
This is a beautiful work. Thank you for sharing the importance of walking with God daily. A's we take up or cross and follow Him it is important we share with others through words and actions. Have a blessed week.
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This is a beautiful work. Thank you for sharing the importance of walking with God daily. A's we take up or cross and follow Him it is important we share with others through words and actions. Have a blessed week.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
Comment from godlucifer
an identity of god is an identity of man. god's identity is man's gifted identity. to walk with god is to betray man's identity in which we will identify once we talk to him. your poem was written in its own way of thoughts and expression. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
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an identity of god is an identity of man. god's identity is man's gifted identity. to walk with god is to betray man's identity in which we will identify once we talk to him. your poem was written in its own way of thoughts and expression. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I'm not sure God is a destroyer, but I expect you might be referring to nature's natural disasters. A faithful and personal write which would benefit from some punctuation, but nevertheless it is written from the heart, love Dolly x
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I'm not sure God is a destroyer, but I expect you might be referring to nature's natural disasters. A faithful and personal write which would benefit from some punctuation, but nevertheless it is written from the heart, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
Comment from meeshu
I think this is one of the best things you have written, Alcreator. the Acrostic is a nice touch but this work stands alone. it has an Ease about it. very fine writing...................meeshu
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I think this is one of the best things you have written, Alcreator. the Acrostic is a nice touch but this work stands alone. it has an Ease about it. very fine writing...................meeshu
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
Comment from tbacha58
The message in your poem has been written with so much depth, the reasons why we should love Him. You wrote from the bottom of your heart, and it's so pure and positive. Just write the way you feel, and do not doubt your self. Its fantastic for the first time to write and come out as beautiful as it should. Terry xoxo
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The message in your poem has been written with so much depth, the reasons why we should love Him. You wrote from the bottom of your heart, and it's so pure and positive. Just write the way you feel, and do not doubt your self. Its fantastic for the first time to write and come out as beautiful as it should. Terry xoxo
Comment Written 10-Feb-2019
