Comment from rama devi

Excellent

So true--and well voiced. I like the simplicity and impact. Good flow. Effective presentation as well! One suggest: consider hyphenating one-seated cinema.

Warmest Smiles,
rd

 Comment Written 28-May-2018

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reply by the author on 28-May-2018

Hi Rama, thank you for the help...I will go back an check it out...thank you sweet girl for a wonderful review...so glad you like it...love you...Linda xxoo

reply by rama devi on 28-May-2018

Love you too, dear. Hugs, rd

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

This is beautiful, Linda. I got caught on the word memories. I thought it belonged to the first line. I did not know it began the second line. I figured it out. Weird how it could be either way. But memories on second line makes the most sense in hindsight. Do you see. It could have been washing away memories. Only way to make it obvious is to put a period or semicolon or comma after away. But up to you. Nice memories are fun to play over and over again. You portrayed it well. Thank you for shsring

 Comment Written 28-May-2018

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reply by the author on 31-May-2018

HI Pam, thank you so much for the help...I do see it....thank you for a wonderful review sweet girl...and you are soooo very welcome...love you...Linda xxoo

Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

Nicely written and clever poem... "A one seated cinema" Great phrase. I love the point you make about our memories that they are like cookies you can pull out to refresh that memory. Yours, diana

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 Comment Written 28-May-2018

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reply by the author on 28-May-2018

HI Diana, thank you so much for an awesome review...so glad you like it...love you...Linda xxoo