Hope
Little life lesson82 total reviews
Comment from johnwilson
I gave you the "six stars" rating because of the wonderful rhyming, words used and a great interpretation of what hope can mean! Wise words and great ending.
I wouldn't change a thing. Also, the picture added a visual punch to your feelings of where hope ought to be placed...."that's when hope works, when you give it away". That artwork showed the reader exactly where hope works! Bravo!
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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I gave you the "six stars" rating because of the wonderful rhyming, words used and a great interpretation of what hope can mean! Wise words and great ending.
I wouldn't change a thing. Also, the picture added a visual punch to your feelings of where hope ought to be placed...."that's when hope works, when you give it away". That artwork showed the reader exactly where hope works! Bravo!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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Many thanks for the stellar review...John
Comment from jusylee72
This is such great advice. My mom used to express this all the time about getting away from your problems and serving others. I do believe you have to face your problems also or they won't go away, but these acts will help you become a better person. Thank you for the reminder.
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reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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This is such great advice. My mom used to express this all the time about getting away from your problems and serving others. I do believe you have to face your problems also or they won't go away, but these acts will help you become a better person. Thank you for the reminder.
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Comment Written 20-Apr-2016
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2016
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Thanks much...John