Nature's Show
3-5-3 form93 total reviews
Comment from c_lucas
I've always considered the great outdoors as God's Cathedral. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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I've always considered the great outdoors as God's Cathedral. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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Hi Charlie, I know what you are saying...thank you so very much...and thank you for the good luck...
Comment from Jackarrie
this is a great entry into the contest 3-5-3, the image is fabulous showing many things of nature
nature's show
beautifully viewed
cinema
Good luck in the contest.
one typo Veiwed
Mary
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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this is a great entry into the contest 3-5-3, the image is fabulous showing many things of nature
nature's show
beautifully viewed
cinema
Good luck in the contest.
one typo Veiwed
Mary
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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Hi Mary, thank you so very much....I am so glad you like it...fixed...thank you for the help...and for the good luck
Comment from Eric1
This is a wonderful and very clever entry for this 3-5-3 Nature competition, brilliant choice of words, good luck in the contest my friend.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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This is a wonderful and very clever entry for this 3-5-3 Nature competition, brilliant choice of words, good luck in the contest my friend.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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Hi Eric, thank you so very much...and for your good luck...so glad you like it
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I Did my friend
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thank you so much Eric...your a doll...luff xxoo
Comment from mfowler
A truly vast image painted here. I imagine your idea emerges from one of those big screen images that encompass natural scene at the movies like an Imax. Not easy to use 11 syllables to capture so much, but you have. You need to fix the spelling of 'viewed' (from 'veiwed') before the vote. All the best.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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A truly vast image painted here. I imagine your idea emerges from one of those big screen images that encompass natural scene at the movies like an Imax. Not easy to use 11 syllables to capture so much, but you have. You need to fix the spelling of 'viewed' (from 'veiwed') before the vote. All the best.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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HI Mark, I fixed it...not good to write a poem with a fever...LOL...much less a contest...LOL...thank you so very much...and for all the best
Comment from LeannaP
I like this read.
It is very interesting considering
the vivid imagery to
help illustrate the poem
displayed here.
I would've never thought
of "natures Cinema"
as a way to describe this
but the author did well at "selling"
to believe this.Well done
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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I like this read.
It is very interesting considering
the vivid imagery to
help illustrate the poem
displayed here.
I would've never thought
of "natures Cinema"
as a way to describe this
but the author did well at "selling"
to believe this.Well done
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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HI Leanna, WOW!!! thank you so very much for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...smiling...
Comment from MusingsOfMWH
The artwork used in conjunction with "Nature's Show" complements your poem splendidly, because it reinforces the words you've chosen in a pleasing visual manner. Well done!
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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The artwork used in conjunction with "Nature's Show" complements your poem splendidly, because it reinforces the words you've chosen in a pleasing visual manner. Well done!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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Hi Mussing, thank you so very much for a great review...I am so glad you like it...
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Anon. I must admit that I am unsure how to write a review on five words. You managged to make a big statement on a topic that is dear to my heart. Good luck in the contest. Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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G'day Anon. I must admit that I am unsure how to write a review on five words. You managged to make a big statement on a topic that is dear to my heart. Good luck in the contest. Cheers Fez
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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Hi Fez, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...
Comment from CR Delport
Nature sure creates some beautiful cinema, but sometimes we are so busy with our own lives that we don't stop to look. This is well done. Good luck.
Take care.
Christelle.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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Nature sure creates some beautiful cinema, but sometimes we are so busy with our own lives that we don't stop to look. This is well done. Good luck.
Take care.
Christelle.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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Hi Christelle, you are so right...I have always said that there are things for people to do ...even if you don't have money...just go for a walk and see all the beauty around you...thank you so very much...
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi,
Beautiful artwork to enhance your 3.5.3.
~~ FYI ~~
Check the first line in your presentation. The 'ow' in 'show' is a much smaller font than the rest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*.*)
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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Hi,
Beautiful artwork to enhance your 3.5.3.
~~ FYI ~~
Check the first line in your presentation. The 'ow' in 'show' is a much smaller font than the rest.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*.*)
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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HI Jax, I hope it is fixed now...I hate the new site...making me crazy...and I had to change one of the words...LMAO...I have a high fever and I trying to think...thank you so much...
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Hi fever....yuk!
It is still the same. Maybe try a different font. Sometimes that will help. OR, delete and recopy/paste.
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I think it fixed it now...can you let me know...thank you...think I caught something...just not sure what...
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Whoohoo!! Yep--- looks good. (*<*)
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thank you sweetie...going to bed...sweet dreams you...LOL...smiling big
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This is pretty, but the syllable count is off. It's supposed to be 3-5-3 (this is 3-3-3). You still have time to change it.
Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
P.S. Spelling alert: should be VIEWED
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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This is pretty, but the syllable count is off. It's supposed to be 3-5-3 (this is 3-3-3). You still have time to change it.
Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer
P.S. Spelling alert: should be VIEWED
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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Hi Jeanie, LMAO...I have a fever and I'm trying to think...and deal with the new site for posting...I changed it...thank you...
