All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 36 "Back and Forth"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Walu Feral
You are great, great, great my friend! This is such a beaut trip down memory lane. It reminded me of the times when I just sit quietly and meditate the past. Well done mate, cheers Fez.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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You are great, great, great my friend! This is such a beaut trip down memory lane. It reminded me of the times when I just sit quietly and meditate the past. Well done mate, cheers Fez.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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thx so much Fez! :)S
Comment from Perp Ihebom
This is a beautiful piece of free verse poetry that tells an enchanting story. It's obvious that a strong imagination was at work, and brought about the uncommon vision. well done
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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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This is a beautiful piece of free verse poetry that tells an enchanting story. It's obvious that a strong imagination was at work, and brought about the uncommon vision. well done
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Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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thx so much Perp! :)S
Comment from marijmd
It has a great rhythm and flow - of course the rowing and water help here. Funny how from the obnoxious gym of posers you could be transported to a tranquil moment of memories.
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It has a great rhythm and flow - of course the rowing and water help here. Funny how from the obnoxious gym of posers you could be transported to a tranquil moment of memories.
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Comment Written 17-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2013
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thx so much mari! :)Sharyn