All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "It Makes Me Happy!"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Selina Stambi
You had me fizzing and popping along with you, Sharyn!
Having read your script, I loved the reference to your special magic child.
The 'periwinkle day' brought to remembrance a previous 'hot-buttered day' you had written of in your Ode to Me!
What delicious vocabulary your spin your lines with!
Here's a virtual six, my friend!
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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You had me fizzing and popping along with you, Sharyn!
Having read your script, I loved the reference to your special magic child.
The 'periwinkle day' brought to remembrance a previous 'hot-buttered day' you had written of in your Ode to Me!
What delicious vocabulary your spin your lines with!
Here's a virtual six, my friend!
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Bless you d - I do rather like playing, don't I? and you're really paying attention - delighted you got the previous reference! :))))S
Comment from ravenblack
keep singing! the stanza that starts w/" scents of salt" reminds me a lot of Whitman, the song of myself, particularly how you address the nature w/in and w/out as "hey you". excellent!
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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keep singing! the stanza that starts w/" scents of salt" reminds me a lot of Whitman, the song of myself, particularly how you address the nature w/in and w/out as "hey you". excellent!
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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thx so much rb - so glad you enjoyed! :)S
Comment from Enrique28
Yes OK OK keep your head on! Listen visionary1234, I think this is an excellent write. It is wonderfully exuberant, and it reflects a happy-go-lucky temperament that makes me smile. A philosophical point conveyed with your usual poetic style.
Excellent presentation. Great stuff! Enrique
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Yes OK OK keep your head on! Listen visionary1234, I think this is an excellent write. It is wonderfully exuberant, and it reflects a happy-go-lucky temperament that makes me smile. A philosophical point conveyed with your usual poetic style.
Excellent presentation. Great stuff! Enrique
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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ok ok ok ... if you say so Enrique! Bless you for your magic '6' on this one my dear!
:)Sharyn
Comment from Shadow Pahn
Hi Sharyn,
Here is some science to go with your great poem.
Looking into a loved one's eyes releases a dosage of Oxytocin, giving us that warm fuzzy feeling. (It's like...a love hormone).
What rhymes with Oxytocin though?
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Hi Sharyn,
Here is some science to go with your great poem.
Looking into a loved one's eyes releases a dosage of Oxytocin, giving us that warm fuzzy feeling. (It's like...a love hormone).
What rhymes with Oxytocin though?
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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aaah, I KNEW I had a reason for not using that word!!!
:)S
Comment from LadyCosgrove
If it makes you happy, then it is yours to enjoy.
You are surrounded by and inspiration beauty it seems -
so why not?
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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If it makes you happy, then it is yours to enjoy.
You are surrounded by and inspiration beauty it seems -
so why not?
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Thx so much LG - glad you enjoyed this one! :)S
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I certainly did.
Sorry about the garbled messages, I have a thing on this computer that guesses what I want to say but keeps getting it wrong. I haven't figured out how to turn it off yet lol
Comment from MelissaBickel
One thing I've noticed about your poems is that they DO read well read silently, but mostly out loud. They have a beat for that open mic scene.
This piece truly made me "See" moments in your life. I Think I need to slow down and see moments in my life and try to capture them.
Enjoyed this.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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One thing I've noticed about your poems is that they DO read well read silently, but mostly out loud. They have a beat for that open mic scene.
This piece truly made me "See" moments in your life. I Think I need to slow down and see moments in my life and try to capture them.
Enjoyed this.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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They'll work either way, Melissa, of course - but I like to think of them musically when I write them.
Blessings - so glad you enjoyed!
:)Sharyn
Comment from c_lucas
Love is not the big moment of togetherness, but the small acts of being unselfish and caring which reinforces the act; putting the happiness of the other above your own.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Love is not the big moment of togetherness, but the small acts of being unselfish and caring which reinforces the act; putting the happiness of the other above your own.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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thx Charlie! :)S
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You're welcome, Sharyln. Charlie
Comment from GarthL
Absolutely, stop and smell the roses, take a moment to be grateful for the simple pleasures that are present every moment. It's a beautiful reminder Sharyn and expressed in a very interesting shape, very creative. I could smell the coffee so I'm going to make one now thank you. Stay well, Garth
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Absolutely, stop and smell the roses, take a moment to be grateful for the simple pleasures that are present every moment. It's a beautiful reminder Sharyn and expressed in a very interesting shape, very creative. I could smell the coffee so I'm going to make one now thank you. Stay well, Garth
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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thx so much Garth! :)Sharyn
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Well done Sharyn, it read very well!!
Comment from hurkad
Makes me happy too:-)
Love the way you have written this piece. I loved the way you have described the blueness of the ocean..paints a very vivid picture.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Makes me happy too:-)
Love the way you have written this piece. I loved the way you have described the blueness of the ocean..paints a very vivid picture.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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thx so much hurkad! :)Sharyn
Comment from misscookie
Tha artwork tells it all.
You capture my attention when I read the first few lines.
Be like a bird in flight look at all the wonders of the world be happy, make every moment count. befor it's to late.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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Tha artwork tells it all.
You capture my attention when I read the first few lines.
Be like a bird in flight look at all the wonders of the world be happy, make every moment count. befor it's to late.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2013
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thx misscookie! :)Sharyn