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All Those Puzzling Pieces

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What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?

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Comment from hifein
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this was wonderful. very tender and communicating an aura of genuine happiness. you included sensory (visual and aural) metaphors, integrating natural and human components, and the feeling came through. the photo too was lovely.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2012
    Thank you so much for your appreciative, and thoughtful, review, my dear!
Comment from Galactia
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What a joyful litle poem reflecting fun times at the beach. Your poem reminded me when my oldest son was little playing at the beach for his first time, making castles and moulds of him self as he wriggled out of the sand leaving just the out cast of his body which of course wasn't perfect.

Great job and GL in the contest

regards
Tia

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2012
    Thx so much Tia - yes, those beach memories seem to be special, don't they?
Comment from Deborah Marie
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Stunning photo to go with a lovely written poem just full of wonderful descriptive words. I just love imagery that been brought to life by this... Job well done for the contest you entered.

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 Comment Written 02-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2012
    Bless you, Deborah Marie!
Comment from OLA THOMAS
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A well done job withgood color and artwork combination. Soothing idea carefully rendered. i perceived the voice of Sharyn in this work, but mystery poet, can you please identify yourself to me after the contest. Goooooood work.

ola thomas

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 Comment Written 02-Dec-2012


reply by the author on 02-Dec-2012
    The Mystery Poet will, indeed, be identified, Ola - and meanwhile, thank you very much for your review!