Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Embrace Integrity"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
102 total reviews
Comment from Alexander E Poet
Good piece for the youth,most beautiful and touching poem filled with love and with emotions.Captivated from the first line straight to the end, Impressive And there were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see.Alexander QQ...
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Good piece for the youth,most beautiful and touching poem filled with love and with emotions.Captivated from the first line straight to the end, Impressive And there were no errors. No typo's and nothing to change as far as i can see.Alexander QQ...
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
Comment from Carolyn 12
I love your poem the morals and the picture. The next to last stanza is words for all of us-Cleanse your hearts from the sins of youth. Love this.
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I love your poem the morals and the picture. The next to last stanza is words for all of us-Cleanse your hearts from the sins of youth. Love this.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
Comment from Piggies Grandma
This is a very lovely poem sarahice, and I enjoyed reading it very much. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. It has some very good advice in it for everyone.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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This is a very lovely poem sarahice, and I enjoyed reading it very much. It is cleverly written and very well thought out. It has some very good advice in it for everyone.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Thank you Piggies for your great and to the point review. Its lovely and I really like it. Love Sarah
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Thank you Piggies for your great and to the point review. Its lovely and I really like it. Love Sarah
Comment from rhymelord
Dear sarahice,
Good strong couplets with excellent rhyme make this a pleasure to read. Your message is strongly represented by simple yet evocative language.
Regards
Reg
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Dear sarahice,
Good strong couplets with excellent rhyme make this a pleasure to read. Your message is strongly represented by simple yet evocative language.
Regards
Reg
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Thank you Rhymelord. Your review is excellent and to the point in every way. A great write that I like. Sarah
Comment from cvcopac
Well written quatrain. Excellent end rhyme. A mature and natural read. Integrity is the narrow road and chosen by few. There is a price on it and it demands constant conflict and hard work. It is rewarding not only unto it's self but to history as well. I think that is the message of this excellent poem.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Well written quatrain. Excellent end rhyme. A mature and natural read. Integrity is the narrow road and chosen by few. There is a price on it and it demands constant conflict and hard work. It is rewarding not only unto it's self but to history as well. I think that is the message of this excellent poem.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Heartfelt thank you Cvcopac for your encouraging and well presented review of my poem. With much appreciation. Sarah
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I enjoyed the poem. Kenny
Comment from stephybs
This is a wonderful piece! And it is sort of like a spiritual teaching! Very uplifting and with all the beautiful colors used and art work supplied this really is an excellent piece. Stephanie
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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This is a wonderful piece! And it is sort of like a spiritual teaching! Very uplifting and with all the beautiful colors used and art work supplied this really is an excellent piece. Stephanie
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Thank you Stephybs for your description of my poem. True, it is quite spiritual and I am glad it had a positive affect on you and was uplifting. Sarah
Comment from misscookie
Bravo, bravo
Youyr poem told it all If only we the elders or older what ever you want to be called The children are having babies and not only their body and mind is not ready for this task.
mothers and fathers must set an example for our young people to follow It all start with a relationship with our savoir and the rest will fall in place. thank you for sharing.
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Bravo, bravo
Youyr poem told it all If only we the elders or older what ever you want to be called The children are having babies and not only their body and mind is not ready for this task.
mothers and fathers must set an example for our young people to follow It all start with a relationship with our savoir and the rest will fall in place. thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Thank you Misscookie. Your review is excellent, and very helpful and encouraging. Glad it brings out these important thoughts about what really matters in life. Love Sarah
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Your very welcome.
Have a blessed and nice day.
Comment from Darren Crozier
sarahice,
I am really liking this piece,
THe Art work couldn't be any more perfectly suited to it either! :)
Good message I think most youngsters could do wit reading.
Seriously well done, good Stanzas well balanced piece.
Darren
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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sarahice,
I am really liking this piece,
THe Art work couldn't be any more perfectly suited to it either! :)
Good message I think most youngsters could do wit reading.
Seriously well done, good Stanzas well balanced piece.
Darren
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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I appreciate your detailed review on my poem and I'm glad you like it. Thank you so much Darren. Sarah
Comment from rashi kumar
Divine! A very well-thought of and brilliantly written poem!
i respect your thoughts, we need to feel the importance of spirituality.
Very beautiful artwork to compliment!
Pleasure to read and review!
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Divine! A very well-thought of and brilliantly written poem!
i respect your thoughts, we need to feel the importance of spirituality.
Very beautiful artwork to compliment!
Pleasure to read and review!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, sarahice, a great job writing this poem about the way we need to teach integrity and responsibilities to ourselves and then to others.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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this is very well written, sarahice, a great job writing this poem about the way we need to teach integrity and responsibilities to ourselves and then to others.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2011
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Thank you for your marvellous review, so true. We must each one of us be the best sample we can all through our Great Love in Heaven! As you say" by the grace of God." Thank you so much Sweetwoodjax
