POEMS, SONGS AND NOTES
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Comment from Queenise
What a creative little smiley face, laugh till the morning comes little jingle. I loved it. You created a lovely get a way for all of us girls. The flow was smooth and the message was plain and clear. Would recommend to others. Kudos. And thanks for the smiles. Queenise
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2009
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What a creative little smiley face, laugh till the morning comes little jingle. I loved it. You created a lovely get a way for all of us girls. The flow was smooth and the message was plain and clear. Would recommend to others. Kudos. And thanks for the smiles. Queenise
Comment Written 24-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2009
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Queenise
I am so pleased that you laughed and enjoyed it...We certainly can't get enough of that lately. Thank you for the kind review. I send a little smile to you :) now be sure and pass it on and we will have a sun shiney day! Carol
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You're welcome Carol. Have a blessed day. Queenise
Comment from Jnetgame
I enjoyed this upbeat, silly poem. I think we all need to break out of the serious stuff sometimes and you did just that. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2009
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I enjoyed this upbeat, silly poem. I think we all need to break out of the serious stuff sometimes and you did just that. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2009
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Jnetgame
Needed to smile and what better way than sharing it with friends. Glad you liked it. Sending a smile to you :) Now you must pass it on and it will be a sun shiny day!!! Carol
Comment from pokerfacewon
After my sad entry into today's contest this lifted my spirits. very nice. I love the way you write. i have read and enjoyed some of your other stuff. Very very good! No, excellent. Heidi aka Pokerface
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reply by the author on 24-Sep-2009
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After my sad entry into today's contest this lifted my spirits. very nice. I love the way you write. i have read and enjoyed some of your other stuff. Very very good! No, excellent. Heidi aka Pokerface
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Comment Written 24-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2009
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Heidi
My spirits have been twisted and knotted for the past few weeks because I'm a mother concerned about my daughter and can't do anything about it. Decided I need to smile and figured what's more fun than having friends smile with me. Glad you enjoyed it! Always a friend, Carol
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Carol,
i am always smiling with you. My daughter says I should write a poem called Kendra. That is her name. What is your daughters name and age. Lets write poems about them.
Heidi aka Pokerface
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Without ever realizing until years later my first three children are:
John 41, Wendy, 39, Michael (died when he was 4)
They are the children in Peter Pan..it was never intentional, but my kids loved it.
When Corrine (Corrie) 30 was born she insisted she needed to be in the story too so she became Tinker Bell and to this day wears Tinker Bell shirts.
My baby is Matthew (my gift from God because after Michael died they said I wouldn't and couldn't have another child) He turned 27 last week.
I have 12 grandchildren and a tiny little great granddaughter too.
What a combination of a story that would be....
Carol
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Carol,
I love it! I have 3 children two boys 16, 12 and a daughter who is 11. they are the light in my life. I love your family tale. true to heart. God bless you.
Heidi aka Pokerface