A Strange Garment!
Acknowledging the Strange Garment we wear in life!76 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A beautiful offering for this contest or just because --- you have melodically delivered your message in such a manner that your reader is 'encompassed within it' by the time they reach the end! ;) Thank you so much for sharing such a wonderful message and opportunity!! :) :) Best of luck at the polls! )
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
A beautiful offering for this contest or just because --- you have melodically delivered your message in such a manner that your reader is 'encompassed within it' by the time they reach the end! ;) Thank you so much for sharing such a wonderful message and opportunity!! :) :) Best of luck at the polls! )
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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A "SALUTE," my dear friend!
Comment from Cindy Decker
I loved reading your poem as I was lulled into its peaceful sound and message. You have a beautiful message: of growing old in love and then on into eternity. Your lives start at where your paths cross, and you don't look back. Exhilarating!
Excellent work. Best wishes for health and happiness.
Cindy
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
I loved reading your poem as I was lulled into its peaceful sound and message. You have a beautiful message: of growing old in love and then on into eternity. Your lives start at where your paths cross, and you don't look back. Exhilarating!
Excellent work. Best wishes for health and happiness.
Cindy
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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A "SALUTE," Cindy!
Comment from January L'Angelle
This is a very well thought out poem with great visual cues. I loved the story line as I saw it about two people growing old together with Gods love on their side. It was lovely. Well done. Respectfully, -January L.
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
This is a very well thought out poem with great visual cues. I loved the story line as I saw it about two people growing old together with Gods love on their side. It was lovely. Well done. Respectfully, -January L.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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A "SALUTE," January!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Yours is a beautiful contest entry, Mystery Author, with equally beautiful, heartfelt words. I love the chosen art to accompany your presentation. It represents peace and hope that will be with all forever. The color scheme highlights the art and allows the truthful words to shine.
I love the great rhyme--both internal and end, the smooth flow, the formatting of each verse, and the superb overall look. However, it is your message that stands above all else. You have painted a perfect picture of true commitment of everlasting, heartfelt love between this couple. Events in the past don't cloud one's outlook on God's gift of love. They are together forever and will stay that way with God's blessing. Your words are inspiring and depict true love.
Your presentation is one that readers need to read several times to fully understand the message. No, it isn't that it is 'too hard to get.' There are many awe-inspiring words/thoughts that readers need to internalize. Thanks for sharing and caring. Best wishes for a well-deserved win. Respectfully with Love and Admiration, Laura Jan
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
Yours is a beautiful contest entry, Mystery Author, with equally beautiful, heartfelt words. I love the chosen art to accompany your presentation. It represents peace and hope that will be with all forever. The color scheme highlights the art and allows the truthful words to shine.
I love the great rhyme--both internal and end, the smooth flow, the formatting of each verse, and the superb overall look. However, it is your message that stands above all else. You have painted a perfect picture of true commitment of everlasting, heartfelt love between this couple. Events in the past don't cloud one's outlook on God's gift of love. They are together forever and will stay that way with God's blessing. Your words are inspiring and depict true love.
Your presentation is one that readers need to read several times to fully understand the message. No, it isn't that it is 'too hard to get.' There are many awe-inspiring words/thoughts that readers need to internalize. Thanks for sharing and caring. Best wishes for a well-deserved win. Respectfully with Love and Admiration, Laura Jan
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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A "SALUTE," Laura Jan! Quite an "AWESOME" review. God Bless.
Comment from Bill Pinder
I like this well written poem about being able to join in a committed relationship in the later years of life and be confident with security in God above all things and also with each other. I like the thought that we don't have to understand everything to be able to accept it. Bill
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
I like this well written poem about being able to join in a committed relationship in the later years of life and be confident with security in God above all things and also with each other. I like the thought that we don't have to understand everything to be able to accept it. Bill
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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A "SALUTE," Bill!
Comment from L.L.M
Hi there . A very poignant and inspiring and beautiful poem you wrote. Great message of hope and faith. Very well written spiritual poetry entry. We
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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
Hi there . A very poignant and inspiring and beautiful poem you wrote. Great message of hope and faith. Very well written spiritual poetry entry. We
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 23-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 23-Apr-2020
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A "SALUTE," L.L.M!