Comment from Mary Kay Bonfante

Exceptional

This is a lovely retrospective in free verse. Your image goes very well with your words.

One error:

did I trip to many times to forgive ?
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did I trip too many times to forgive?

Is the extra space before each question mark deliberate? It is poetry, after all.

I love the last stanza, the most beautiful one that brings it all together.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020

Hi Mary Kay, thank you so very much for your help my sweet friend...thank you for a wonderful review...and all your lovely stars...have a wonderful evening...love you...Linda xxoo

reply by Mary Kay Bonfante on 15-Mar-2020

You're very welcome, Linda. I enjoyed your lovely poem. So happy to give you the stars. Love and blessings, Mary Kay xoxo

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem about memories of the past often make us wonder if we did it all correct. Then we see the mistakes we made along the way were the ones who made us stronger.

Typo
did I trip to(too) many times to forgive ?


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 Comment Written 15-Mar-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020

Hi Sandra, thank you for the help sweet girl...and for a wonderful review...I guess we learn wisdom from our mistakes...thank you my sweet friend...love you...Linda xxoo