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Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "God Gives Me Everything!"Dedicated, Thanks to God, God's Appreciation
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Comment from Janetsue
This is a positive and heartfelt posting sharing your feelings and speaking about prayer. I especially like the picture with the figures walking toward the light. It all fits together relating to the personal journey of your life.
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This is a positive and heartfelt posting sharing your feelings and speaking about prayer. I especially like the picture with the figures walking toward the light. It all fits together relating to the personal journey of your life.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
Comment from Tpa
An outstanding piece of poetry that tells the truth in each line, especially the final stanza where gifts are given by Him, but so few acknowledge His blessing and attempt to venture upon their own.
I can see by your writings, you chose his gift, and you use it quite well.
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An outstanding piece of poetry that tells the truth in each line, especially the final stanza where gifts are given by Him, but so few acknowledge His blessing and attempt to venture upon their own.
I can see by your writings, you chose his gift, and you use it quite well.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Everything we see, feel, and hear is a gift for God. Your poem is a lovely tribute to a loving God. I know you said this wasn't an acrostic, but it looks like one. Regardless, it's a wonderful tribute to Him. Well done, I enjoyed reading it. :) Sandra xx
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Everything we see, feel, and hear is a gift for God. Your poem is a lovely tribute to a loving God. I know you said this wasn't an acrostic, but it looks like one. Regardless, it's a wonderful tribute to Him. Well done, I enjoyed reading it. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
Comment from JLR
I really appreciated your authors notes as much as your verse, both say a lot and tell a very effective truth. Seldom do we understand GOD and the unfolding of a day in the life of being a human....good success as always with your consistent work.
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I really appreciated your authors notes as much as your verse, both say a lot and tell a very effective truth. Seldom do we understand GOD and the unfolding of a day in the life of being a human....good success as always with your consistent work.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
Comment from Sugarray77
I like your faith-filled poem and loved reading in your notes that... God is religion free... that is so true and deep. I enjoyed reading your entry for the three line poem. Good luck and God bless you.
Melissa
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I like your faith-filled poem and loved reading in your notes that... God is religion free... that is so true and deep. I enjoyed reading your entry for the three line poem. Good luck and God bless you.
Melissa
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice 3 Line poem you have penned about God gives you everything. You used very good words and very lovely imagery. God does take care of us when we trust in Him and believe in Him. Blessings, Teri
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This is a very nice 3 Line poem you have penned about God gives you everything. You used very good words and very lovely imagery. God does take care of us when we trust in Him and believe in Him. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
Comment from royowen
I love your quote God is religion free, and that's true, love comes without a price tag, and, by definition,God is love, which is free of any law, and if we do the same, we too are clear of the law. Beautifully written my friend, blessings, Roy
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I love your quote God is religion free, and that's true, love comes without a price tag, and, by definition,God is love, which is free of any law, and if we do the same, we too are clear of the law. Beautifully written my friend, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
This verse depicts God as the provider of all good things and the supplier of all needs. Wants and wishes are different from needs. We are not promised all wants. He is the final judge.
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This verse depicts God as the provider of all good things and the supplier of all needs. Wants and wishes are different from needs. We are not promised all wants. He is the final judge.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
Comment from Hitcher
I get the message here, you trust in God to give you all the things He thinks you need and nothing more.
I'm not sure what is going on with the second line but you have;
He gives me on His time, different something,
should that not be;
He gives me in/of His time, a different something
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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I get the message here, you trust in God to give you all the things He thinks you need and nothing more.
I'm not sure what is going on with the second line but you have;
He gives me on His time, different something,
should that not be;
He gives me in/of His time, a different something
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much for a review with suggestions.
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I have changed the line, please read and offer your valuable suggestions, if you wish to offer.
Thanking you in advance,
Alcreator Litt Dear
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That is much better friend and I will change my rating : ))
Comment from Amenian Aypotheeno
Well if the whole world is my country, all mankind are my brethren and to do good is my religion, then what do I follow? My heart, my head, my body, mt spirit, my soul or all of them? No matter what you think, feel or believe as long as you are grounded and follow destiny's path, then I hope you'll always find happiness. Either love to live or live to love :) Nice open and intelligent write.
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Well if the whole world is my country, all mankind are my brethren and to do good is my religion, then what do I follow? My heart, my head, my body, mt spirit, my soul or all of them? No matter what you think, feel or believe as long as you are grounded and follow destiny's path, then I hope you'll always find happiness. Either love to live or live to love :) Nice open and intelligent write.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2019