Unforgotten
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Comment from Joan E.
I just returned from the short cruise along the coast of Italy and Greece and was delighted to find your free verse about love. I admired your "movie" metaphor and the image of "a one seat cinema" reinforced by the artwork. Cheers- Joan
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I just returned from the short cruise along the coast of Italy and Greece and was delighted to find your free verse about love. I admired your "movie" metaphor and the image of "a one seat cinema" reinforced by the artwork. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 28-May-2018
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HI Joan, I hope we had a great time...and can't wait to see the pictures...and your awesome descriptions...thank you for a wonderful review sweet girl...and allllll your wonderful stars...love you...Linda xxoo
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Thanks for the welcome-back and encouragement. I hope glittering stars dance in your dreams as well. Hugs- Joan
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you are always so welcome sweet girl...big hugs back at you...lot's of love...xxoo
Comment from CD Richards
I very much like the imagery you've used here, and the accompanying picture fits perfectly. I can't say I personally identify, as most of my "personal cinema viewings" are horror flicks, not love stories. Thankfully, possibly the only true love story I've known is still playing. Anyway, a fine job. The words flow well, and the choice not to punctuate works well with this piece. Very nice work - Craig
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I very much like the imagery you've used here, and the accompanying picture fits perfectly. I can't say I personally identify, as most of my "personal cinema viewings" are horror flicks, not love stories. Thankfully, possibly the only true love story I've known is still playing. Anyway, a fine job. The words flow well, and the choice not to punctuate works well with this piece. Very nice work - Craig
Comment Written 28-May-2018
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Hi Craig, thank you for a wonderful review...I hope your love story still playing last forever...so glad you like my poem...thank you...Linda xxoo
Comment from damommy
This is so true. Memories play in our mind like a movie. We have access to it anytime, any place.
You've described it so well in this short poem. Well done!
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This is so true. Memories play in our mind like a movie. We have access to it anytime, any place.
You've described it so well in this short poem. Well done!
Comment Written 28-May-2018
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Hi Yvonne, thank you so much my sweet friend for a wonderful review...some memories I would love to see over and over....some...well...I guess there has to be some bad ones...sigh...thank you sweet girl...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from jenintorre
This is a very profound little poem about true love. I can definately relate to it.
You have told a very good story in very few wlrds. I love the artwork that you have chosen.
Best wishes Jen.
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This is a very profound little poem about true love. I can definately relate to it.
You have told a very good story in very few wlrds. I love the artwork that you have chosen.
Best wishes Jen.
Comment Written 28-May-2018
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HI Jen, Thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...I too relate to it...best wishes to you as well sweet girl...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from royowen
This is so true dear Linda, the truest love will repeat like a repeating scene, one never forgets the love that is given by another, andvisvthe stamp on a life that's worthwhile, well done, dear friend, you've sagely hit the nail on the head with this fine work, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 29-May-2018
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This is so true dear Linda, the truest love will repeat like a repeating scene, one never forgets the love that is given by another, andvisvthe stamp on a life that's worthwhile, well done, dear friend, you've sagely hit the nail on the head with this fine work, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 28-May-2018
reply by the author on 29-May-2018
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HI Roy, you never forget loves that won your heart...good or bad...you can move on...but the memories will always be there...thank you for a wonderful review my sweet friend...Blessings to you...Love Linda xxoo
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Always a pleasure Linda
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smiling big..xxoo love
Comment from meeshu
quite nice I. Raven, a theater for one and a stage for many. well written with solid meter flow. and a strong lesson in love..........meeshu
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quite nice I. Raven, a theater for one and a stage for many. well written with solid meter flow. and a strong lesson in love..........meeshu
Comment Written 28-May-2018
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Hi meeshu, thank you so much my sweet friend for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A sentimental write Linda and we do sometimes think back to when we truly lost our heart to someone and the memory ne'er leaves us, I could identify with your words, love Dolly x
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A sentimental write Linda and we do sometimes think back to when we truly lost our heart to someone and the memory ne'er leaves us, I could identify with your words, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-May-2018
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Hi Dolly, thank you my sweet friend for a wonderful review...I can relate to it as well...sigh...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from Hitcher
True love and the cherished memories it imprints on ones mind being accessed in a one seated cinema... Nice! I enjoyed the creativity and sentiment of this one friend.
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True love and the cherished memories it imprints on ones mind being accessed in a one seated cinema... Nice! I enjoyed the creativity and sentiment of this one friend.
Comment Written 28-May-2018
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Hi Hitcher, good to see you my sweet friend...thank you for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...God Bless...love Linda xxoo
Comment from lyenochka
It's both beautiful and sad at the same time. Yes, one never forgets one's true love. And memories comfort us but that it's a memory movie played to only one makes me feel sad like in the picture. On one hand, he's the most honored that he gets to see the movie customized for him but to not share it with the beloved is sad. This poem says so much with so few words!
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It's both beautiful and sad at the same time. Yes, one never forgets one's true love. And memories comfort us but that it's a memory movie played to only one makes me feel sad like in the picture. On one hand, he's the most honored that he gets to see the movie customized for him but to not share it with the beloved is sad. This poem says so much with so few words!
Comment Written 28-May-2018
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HI Helen, OH sweet girl...thank you so much my sweet friends for a wonderful review...there are memories I would love to see everyday...and the are some...no thank you...thank you so very much sweet girl...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Unforgotten", is short, succinct and very much to the point. This talented poet's work is delightfully descriptive. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. To me this is a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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"Unforgotten", is short, succinct and very much to the point. This talented poet's work is delightfully descriptive. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. To me this is a six. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 28-May-2018
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Hi Lady of the Castle...so good to see you Duchess...how are things in your neighborhood???...it finally got hot here...not complaining...not yet anyway...LOL...thank you sweet lady for a wonderful review...and for allll your shinning stars...smiling ear to ear...good to see you...love you...Linda xxoo
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Hi Linda, my possum............It's good to read to read work again. Things in the neighbour hood are getting colder. Snow's in the air.....brrrh!
love you too, the Duchess
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it sounds so strange to hear you say "snow in the air"...we just got past it...LOL...now we are HOT...103 heat index yesterday...and today about the same...I guess I better whip out the ice...LOL...love you...xxoo