Lol. It's got an interesting beat and it certainly reads like a song. I like how your creative mind works - dreaming up a whole scenario entirely from a mishearing of what you said!
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Comment Written 07-May-2018
reply by the author on 07-May-2018
Yes, Helen, that mishearing gave me this song. Thank you for giving it its first review. I'm glad it made you LOL.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
Thanks again, Helen, for your encouraging review and support. I was so shocked when my song won FanStory's Poem of the Month that I memorized and performed it a cappella two days later at the San Francisco Free Folk Festival. I am practicing my guitar and writing new songs.
reply by lyenochka on 13-Jun-2018
Wonderful that you're using your gifts and performing and adding music, too! Thanks for sharing, Andre.