Free Verse Collection
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Comment from Asyraf N. Jamsari
I am enchanted by this writing. It is so soothing and pleasantly beautiful. I enjoy the idea and the concept. Its rather a rare thing to write on moths, as usually butterflies would be the more overrated between the two. Nice vocabulary and poem flows perfectly. Best of luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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I am enchanted by this writing. It is so soothing and pleasantly beautiful. I enjoy the idea and the concept. Its rather a rare thing to write on moths, as usually butterflies would be the more overrated between the two. Nice vocabulary and poem flows perfectly. Best of luck with the contest!
Comment Written 22-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Thanks for your review and comments, Asyraf. I very much appreciate the six stars. All the best, Tony
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi Tony; thank you for sharing this well penned poem about the hawk moth. Your free verse poetry is well structured and gives us a look at the work of this tiny critter. You created a great deal of imagery here.
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Hi Tony; thank you for sharing this well penned poem about the hawk moth. Your free verse poetry is well structured and gives us a look at the work of this tiny critter. You created a great deal of imagery here.
Good luck in the contest,
~patty~
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Comment Written 22-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Thanks Patty. Appreciate your kind words. Tony