A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "I Am Your Canvas"Assorted poems of love
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Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is an excellent write, missy, you did an excellent job writing this beautiful write about the colors of your love, great imagery presented here. I enjoyed reading this one
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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this is an excellent write, missy, you did an excellent job writing this beautiful write about the colors of your love, great imagery presented here. I enjoyed reading this one
Comment Written 01-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Oh Jax this is just the icing on the cake for me tonight :) Thank you so very much hon. :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from mbagby23
Loving and colorful. For I when want the best color to paint a pretty picture of how one loves me too. This is sweet as seeing the beauty in the rainbow. Nice work.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Loving and colorful. For I when want the best color to paint a pretty picture of how one loves me too. This is sweet as seeing the beauty in the rainbow. Nice work.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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mbagby23, thank you for this lovely and sensitive review of my humble work. I will return the favor :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from Light322
I liked how you developed the type of poem which you created. I did not give you all the stars because I believe you can still work in some of the wording you used. For example: You mentioned there twice and it was fine the first time you mention it but the second time it just did not fit for me. Maybe everywhere... and then because you can't put THAT before your love fills me with-you can say your love fills me within. Is suggestions that when I read it, it just did not work for me as it is. Anyhow good job.
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Very nice.
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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I liked how you developed the type of poem which you created. I did not give you all the stars because I believe you can still work in some of the wording you used. For example: You mentioned there twice and it was fine the first time you mention it but the second time it just did not fit for me. Maybe everywhere... and then because you can't put THAT before your love fills me with-you can say your love fills me within. Is suggestions that when I read it, it just did not work for me as it is. Anyhow good job.
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Very nice.
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Thank you so much and I will look at your suggestions and work on it and will ask you to come back and revisit this work again if you don't mind :)
Missy
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Your welcome. Looking forward to it.
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I have corrected my piece per your suggestions...please revisit :)
Missy
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Very nice and changed my score as well.
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Tytyty
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:)
Comment from Glasstruth
You definitely have the feel of it here. Love the shape of this and your words of passion flow like a gentle stream of beautiful metaphors. Like how you have "I" on top and how it ends with "Radiant!" Awesome! Les
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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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You definitely have the feel of it here. Love the shape of this and your words of passion flow like a gentle stream of beautiful metaphors. Like how you have "I" on top and how it ends with "Radiant!" Awesome! Les
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Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Thank you, G for the absolutely wonderful review :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from lightink
This is exquisite! What a delicious, vibrant and passionate piece! I think this sort of shape poetry goes really well with your style as well! Thank you for sharing this piece!
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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This is exquisite! What a delicious, vibrant and passionate piece! I think this sort of shape poetry goes really well with your style as well! Thank you for sharing this piece!
Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Big ol hug for you my lil LT. This is just the encouragement I needed today!! Been a long two weeks actually! Long story...lol
Always,
Missy
Comment from Pudd-n-tain
Well written. Beautiful. Make this Ole Gal yearn for young love again!
Descriptive with touching romantic verse. You have done a wonderful job. Your wording isn't pushed, it flows from within your soul. I enjoyed reading and commend you on the form you've styled your verse, while still keeping it real--the way love should be reflected.
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reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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Well written. Beautiful. Make this Ole Gal yearn for young love again!
Descriptive with touching romantic verse. You have done a wonderful job. Your wording isn't pushed, it flows from within your soul. I enjoyed reading and commend you on the form you've styled your verse, while still keeping it real--the way love should be reflected.
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Comment Written 31-Aug-2015
reply by the author on 31-Aug-2015
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From one ol gal to another...thank ya sugga :) Us ol gals have to stick together lol. We can be as young as we want with our words...true?
Always,
Missy
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Ya said it right, sista! Ha ha.