Comment from Deborah Marie

Excellent

Virtual six! Your title caught my attention and made me want to read more. What a clever way to write this; full of impressive imagery, lite and airy progression, rhythm and flow. A magical sense to it for any child to want to read. Good luck in the contest, Deb

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 Comment Written 16-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015

Thanks, Deb - so glad you enjoyed this little romp.

.You should know that there are three other Gobbledegooks poems of a similar style - they are scattered around my portfolio. I hope by tonight they will all be collected into one book to make them easier to find.

Steve

Comment from Walu Feral

Excellent

G'day Steve. Crikey mate, try saying it once! Bugger thrice! I just read it to Delia and Champers and they loved it as well. Man you are a great poet with a brilliant imagination. Good luck in the contest, cheers Fez

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 Comment Written 16-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2015

Fez, thanks as always for the great review and the enthusiastic appreciation.

Steve