Nature's Show
3-5-3 form93 total reviews
Comment from MelB
Veiwed - viewed
Syllable count is spot on.
Beautiful artwork.
Nature is a beautiful cinema.
Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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Veiwed - viewed
Syllable count is spot on.
Beautiful artwork.
Nature is a beautiful cinema.
Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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Hi Melissa, fixed it sweetie...a bit of a fever last night...I think I was punchy...LOL...thank you so very much sweet girl...and thank you for your best wishes
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Hope you are feeling better my friend!
Comment from TOMORAL
You've got my vote. Absolutely stunning with both the words and the picture. Nature's show is something we all sometimes overlook. Thanks for the reminder this morning, as I feel grateful for all things good. Excellent.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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You've got my vote. Absolutely stunning with both the words and the picture. Nature's show is something we all sometimes overlook. Thanks for the reminder this morning, as I feel grateful for all things good. Excellent.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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Hi Tomoral, thank you so very much for a wonderful review....and for your wonderful vote...I am so glad you like it...God Bless...
Comment from kiwijenny
And you don't have to find your seat in the dark to view nature
Or pay exorbitant prices...or have someone whisper what is going to happen next...my brother in law..grrrrrr
Well penned poem
God bless
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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And you don't have to find your seat in the dark to view nature
Or pay exorbitant prices...or have someone whisper what is going to happen next...my brother in law..grrrrrr
Well penned poem
God bless
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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HI Jenny, LOL...thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...God Bless you too...have a great day...
Comment from fimarie78
well chosen words. You are right, nature is the most beautiful thing we can watch- so many hidden surprises. Check spelling of viewed.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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well chosen words. You are right, nature is the most beautiful thing we can watch- so many hidden surprises. Check spelling of viewed.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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Hi Fimarie, all fixed...thank you for your help...so glad you like it...God Bless
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Friend,
Lovely piece of poetry meeting the desired norms and beautifully depicting its theme!
Wording is simple as well as impressive with lively imagery.
Picture enhances beauty of the poem.
Good Luck!
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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Hello Friend,
Lovely piece of poetry meeting the desired norms and beautifully depicting its theme!
Wording is simple as well as impressive with lively imagery.
Picture enhances beauty of the poem.
Good Luck!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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Hi RP, thank you so much sweetie...I am so glad you like it...and thank you for the luck...your friend
Comment from Autumn Splendour
Wow, in three lines you express the beauty of nature which is displayed as one would experience in a cinema. Lovely. The artwork fits the poem well. Good luck to your contest.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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Wow, in three lines you express the beauty of nature which is displayed as one would experience in a cinema. Lovely. The artwork fits the poem well. Good luck to your contest.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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HI Autumn, thank you so much for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...it is how I see nature...a big cinema...thank you for the luck...
Comment from scd41
In cinema, we get glimpses of nature's beauty but they hardly are comparable with the real ones. It would be inappropriate to imagine cinema when one is viewing nature's show. First two lines excite the imagination.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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In cinema, we get glimpses of nature's beauty but they hardly are comparable with the real ones. It would be inappropriate to imagine cinema when one is viewing nature's show. First two lines excite the imagination.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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HI Scd, thank you for a great review...I am so glad you like it...
Comment from Dean Kuch
Nature does sometimes put on quite a show, and we get enjoyment of watching. A spectacular thunderstorm for instance is as exciting as a fireworks display in many respects. A robin's song, the fight for survival as baby sea turtle hatchlings race from their birthing place on the beach into the sea to avoid being eaten by predators. There are wondrous sights far too numerous to mention here.
Well done, and excellent 3-5-3.
Good luck in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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Nature does sometimes put on quite a show, and we get enjoyment of watching. A spectacular thunderstorm for instance is as exciting as a fireworks display in many respects. A robin's song, the fight for survival as baby sea turtle hatchlings race from their birthing place on the beach into the sea to avoid being eaten by predators. There are wondrous sights far too numerous to mention here.
Well done, and excellent 3-5-3.
Good luck in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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Hi Dean, thank you so much sweetie for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...and thank you for the luck...
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The pleasure was all mine. :)
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smiling...xxoo
Comment from ravim
nature's show
beautifully veiwed
cinema
Beautiful thought-flow. Nature is the best movie theater and you can keep watching all your lifetime. Great entry into the contest. And good luck.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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nature's show
beautifully veiwed
cinema
Beautiful thought-flow. Nature is the best movie theater and you can keep watching all your lifetime. Great entry into the contest. And good luck.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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HI Ravim, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...and thank you for the luck...
Comment from kiwisteveh
You chose an interesting metaphor (cinema) for what you term 'nature's show', but the more I thought about it, the more I felt it was inappropriate - you have taken nature and brought it to an artificial environment indoors... although I do understand you were trying to convey the colour and 'magic' of nature.
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Steve
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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You chose an interesting metaphor (cinema) for what you term 'nature's show', but the more I thought about it, the more I felt it was inappropriate - you have taken nature and brought it to an artificial environment indoors... although I do understand you were trying to convey the colour and 'magic' of nature.
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Steve
Comment Written 10-Feb-2015
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
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thank you
