All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 52 "Beginnings and Endings"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Pili Pubul
Astounding interesting poem about the meaning of life.
Written in excellent style and meaningful imagery , deep thinking
I find myself having more questions than answers as times goes by.
A pleasure to read. Pili
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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Astounding interesting poem about the meaning of life.
Written in excellent style and meaningful imagery , deep thinking
I find myself having more questions than answers as times goes by.
A pleasure to read. Pili
Comment Written 23-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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me too, Pili - do you think anything gets clearer?
:)S
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No...;-)
Comment from Curt Winslow
This is a pretty poem. Yes, life begins and in what seems like a moment it has passed before our eyes. My only goal in life is to make my life useful for God. Great job!
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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This is a pretty poem. Yes, life begins and in what seems like a moment it has passed before our eyes. My only goal in life is to make my life useful for God. Great job!
Comment Written 23-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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thx so much Curt! :)S
Comment from Louise Michelle
Nicely done, Sharyn. I felt the rhythm of the waltz and pictured our souls, our essence swirling through time with no beginning and no end. I particularly loved incoming tides just the breath of the ocean - very original. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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Nicely done, Sharyn. I felt the rhythm of the waltz and pictured our souls, our essence swirling through time with no beginning and no end. I particularly loved incoming tides just the breath of the ocean - very original. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 23-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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Bless you Lou - that was my favorite too! :))S
Comment from robina1978
Excellent artwork complements your poem. Thanks for your foot note, I needed that, you did as this told us. It's a well written ABAB poem about life and more. I admire it has the rhythm of waltz. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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Excellent artwork complements your poem. Thanks for your foot note, I needed that, you did as this told us. It's a well written ABAB poem about life and more. I admire it has the rhythm of waltz. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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arent' you a sweetheart? Thank you so much for your lovely six on this one Ine! :)Sharyn
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welcome, did you not get so many messages? I wrote to Tom and he asked which one, so I referred to you, Ine
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no, it's never happened again, Ine. I remember this happened several months ago with Rondeno, too - but it happened to several people, not just me. Weird, hmm? :)
Comment from Evelyn Fort Stewart
I'd need a class to understand all the directions, you're much smarter than I. Now to the poem, This was a very enjoyable read. I had no problem moving from one picture to another as you painted them with words for me. Good job. God loves you and I do too.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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I'd need a class to understand all the directions, you're much smarter than I. Now to the poem, This was a very enjoyable read. I had no problem moving from one picture to another as you painted them with words for me. Good job. God loves you and I do too.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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Forget the directions and just sing it Evelyn - I only put the techie bits in there for people who are interested/ learning etc - you don't really need them to understand the poem (hopefully!)
Blessings,
Sharyn
Comment from J. Dark
This is an amazingly enjoyable read, Sharyn, and I can strongly relate to your words. Love the way the first part incorporates language of a child (tickly) to match the era you are talking about and the magic you bring to the ending. Definitely a six, so apologies that the site won't allow it, my friend.
Kindest of regards,
Julie :0)
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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This is an amazingly enjoyable read, Sharyn, and I can strongly relate to your words. Love the way the first part incorporates language of a child (tickly) to match the era you are talking about and the magic you bring to the ending. Definitely a six, so apologies that the site won't allow it, my friend.
Kindest of regards,
Julie :0)
Comment Written 23-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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Bless you Julie - glad you enjoyed this one! :)s
Comment from Sasha
I enjoyed this immensely. What a deeply moving poem and with a powerful message too. I love the entire poem and your rhyme, to me, wss spot on. This is a terrific entry for this contest and I wish you all the best.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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I enjoyed this immensely. What a deeply moving poem and with a powerful message too. I love the entire poem and your rhyme, to me, wss spot on. This is a terrific entry for this contest and I wish you all the best.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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Thank you so much my dear - I wrote this one at the beach the other day - amazing what thoughts go thru ones' head, hmm?
:)))S
Comment from emjaihammond
So many questions aren't there? This brought up a lot of my own thoughts of late. It has a way of making them come front and center, asking the questions that are on my mind as well. I felt a familiar kinship to many of the word pictures that come from your work, like laying on your back looking up at the stars and taking it all for granted, until later when you begin to wonder why. This is a good and thoughtful poem. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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So many questions aren't there? This brought up a lot of my own thoughts of late. It has a way of making them come front and center, asking the questions that are on my mind as well. I felt a familiar kinship to many of the word pictures that come from your work, like laying on your back looking up at the stars and taking it all for granted, until later when you begin to wonder why. This is a good and thoughtful poem. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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Bless you MJ! :)Sharyn
Comment from dmt1967
I feel like that a lot of the time my friend like I am going round and around and never getting anywhere nice write good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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I feel like that a lot of the time my friend like I am going round and around and never getting anywhere nice write good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing
Comment Written 23-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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We are indeed strange beings, hmm?
:)S
Comment from c_lucas
Thank God we only have to answer young people questions. By their teenage years, they have all the answers. I enjoyed you poem. It is very well written.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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Thank God we only have to answer young people questions. By their teenage years, they have all the answers. I enjoyed you poem. It is very well written.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2013
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2013
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thx so much Charlie - of course - just ask my 16 year old! :)S