I'm a Chameleon
no colors of my own ... the worst kind of sad83 total reviews
Comment from megg_2020
I believe this was best entry for this contest. It was wonderfully written and very, very unique. For the uniqueness alone, you'll get my vote. Well done. Good luck!
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I believe this was best entry for this contest. It was wonderfully written and very, very unique. For the uniqueness alone, you'll get my vote. Well done. Good luck!
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thank you SOOOO much megg!
Comment from Selina Stambi
My favourite line: at least it's a colour that will truly belong only to me ...
A lovely picture to complement a very well written poem. You have some pretty lines in there .. the cellophane boundaries ...
Good luck in the contest. A great poem.
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My favourite line: at least it's a colour that will truly belong only to me ...
A lovely picture to complement a very well written poem. You have some pretty lines in there .. the cellophane boundaries ...
Good luck in the contest. A great poem.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2012
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Thx so much Rfs!
Comment from Tina McKala
Sharyn, I believe this has been the best poem I`ve read from you (and believe me I love your works so much!) but this one touched me somewhere very deep on those hidden places we try to keep covered even in front of us...I feel like a chameleon for most of the time...I know that feeling...you captured it so brilliantly! Thank you so much for his amazing piece of art!
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Sharyn, I believe this has been the best poem I`ve read from you (and believe me I love your works so much!) but this one touched me somewhere very deep on those hidden places we try to keep covered even in front of us...I feel like a chameleon for most of the time...I know that feeling...you captured it so brilliantly! Thank you so much for his amazing piece of art!
Comment Written 13-Dec-2012
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aaah - I knew you would resonate with this one, after reading your piece the other day!
Comment from elliejean
I love the poem. I have met some people with no emotions of their won. They can and do imitate other peoples emotion. But they are like a soul thief. Great work.
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I love the poem. I have met some people with no emotions of their won. They can and do imitate other peoples emotion. But they are like a soul thief. Great work.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2012
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indeed they are, elliejean - thank you!
Comment from Janet Foor
I understand your poem very well. I was married to a man for 30 years and I would wake up each morning and ask him how he was doing, knowing that would be how I was doing too. Great picture. Nicely done.
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I understand your poem very well. I was married to a man for 30 years and I would wake up each morning and ask him how he was doing, knowing that would be how I was doing too. Great picture. Nicely done.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2012
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aaah, thank you for your understanding my dear! You'll know EXACTLY where I'm coming from then!
Comment from Joan E.
Neat picture selection to illustrate your theme! You use a fascinating premise about being a "chameleon". I particularly liked your "cellophane boundaries" and "fear" descriptions. -Joan
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Neat picture selection to illustrate your theme! You use a fascinating premise about being a "chameleon". I particularly liked your "cellophane boundaries" and "fear" descriptions. -Joan
Comment Written 13-Dec-2012
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thx Joan!
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Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment from Jean Lutz
I think the color inside just poured out in ink. A soul of many hues. Don't be sad, be you. Then you will find it is those around you that become chameleons. Best wishes with the entry.
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I think the color inside just poured out in ink. A soul of many hues. Don't be sad, be you. Then you will find it is those around you that become chameleons. Best wishes with the entry.
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thx Jean!
Comment from October21
Wow! I love the idea of being a chameleon to show that people who are sad just tend to blend in. Very clever. Also I thought Mayr a red background would have suite the poem.
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Wow! I love the idea of being a chameleon to show that people who are sad just tend to blend in. Very clever. Also I thought Mayr a red background would have suite the poem.
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thx october!
Comment from Benjamin Valencia
Hello. I found your poem interesting even though, I wasn't thrilled with the format. the wording was a little large and spaced where it made the scrolling down a little of a nuisance. The picture you attached is appropriate and I liked your use of a chameleon. Indeed. We are walking mood rings ready to adapt our moods according to the society in and all around us. We and our moods are a product of our society. Kind regards and good luck. Cheers.
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Hello. I found your poem interesting even though, I wasn't thrilled with the format. the wording was a little large and spaced where it made the scrolling down a little of a nuisance. The picture you attached is appropriate and I liked your use of a chameleon. Indeed. We are walking mood rings ready to adapt our moods according to the society in and all around us. We and our moods are a product of our society. Kind regards and good luck. Cheers.
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Comment Written 13-Dec-2012
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gee thanks Ben - hope your mouse finger recovers from all that excessive scrolling. Really?
Comment from Allison78
That would be truly sad, not to be able to feel your emotions. I think this is very interesting is not true for you. Well written and good luck!
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That would be truly sad, not to be able to feel your emotions. I think this is very interesting is not true for you. Well written and good luck!
Comment Written 13-Dec-2012
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thx so much Allison!
