Lonely Hearts Meet
Viewing comments for Chapter 63 "part two, Chapter 19"Anna and her son escape from a man-made Hell.
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Comment from Gungalo
Oh boy, she really tood a beating from Bobby didn't she? Now she is in a coma and needs an operation to survive. Sigh, I hope she makes it for it doesn't look so good right now>
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2012
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Oh boy, she really tood a beating from Bobby didn't she? Now she is in a coma and needs an operation to survive. Sigh, I hope she makes it for it doesn't look so good right now>
Comment Written 22-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and your support.
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Sigh it's so good girl!!
Comment from adewpearl
I'm so glad Bobby is out of the picture but now worried what his crazy mother will do.
You describe the extent of Anna's injuries in vivid detail
Good dialogue that shows effectively how upset Troy is.
A good cliffhanger ending. Brooke :-)
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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2012
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I'm so glad Bobby is out of the picture but now worried what his crazy mother will do.
You describe the extent of Anna's injuries in vivid detail
Good dialogue that shows effectively how upset Troy is.
A good cliffhanger ending. Brooke :-)
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Comment Written 22-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2012
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Thank you for the kind review and your support of my writing. I appreciate both.
