Talking
Thoughts and such sorry if it is a bit rocky72 total reviews
Comment from emmaysavage
Good poem. I wouild like to see some corrections:
to distracted - too
here his voice - hear
It is true a voice can take you far away
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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2012
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Good poem. I wouild like to see some corrections:
to distracted - too
here his voice - hear
It is true a voice can take you far away
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Comment Written 11-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2012
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I made the corrections thank you for pointing them out for me
Comment from TammyGail
I liked this poem keimosobie, it was different from your normal verse, well written and expressive. Your imagery is striking with your color scheme, thanks for sharing it was a pleasure to read and review.
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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2012
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I liked this poem keimosobie, it was different from your normal verse, well written and expressive. Your imagery is striking with your color scheme, thanks for sharing it was a pleasure to read and review.
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Comment Written 11-Feb-2012
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2012
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I'm his daughter and my writing tends to be different no matter how much we are alike
