Poems of Love and Spirit
Viewing comments for Chapter 26 "Embrace Integrity"This book is about love, God's Love most of all.
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Comment from God's Writer
So beautiful my dear. I love your love poem. I will have to read more. I think I am going to feel the same about them. Such a beautiful mind you have. A mind that will make the angels sing. So wonderfully put. Thank you for giving me the pleasure of looking at you in all your beauty.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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So beautiful my dear. I love your love poem. I will have to read more. I think I am going to feel the same about them. Such a beautiful mind you have. A mind that will make the angels sing. So wonderfully put. Thank you for giving me the pleasure of looking at you in all your beauty.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
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That is OK Sarah. I must thank you for the elegantly written poem. I don't flatter. Flattering is empty and means nothing. I compliment from my heart and is the truth as I see it.
Comment from BothePo8
This is a very nice poem! It tells an interesting story of what you consider the best qualities of life, integrity being the most important. The rhyme is excellent but if you do a syllable count you will find the rhythm is a little inconsistent in places. That can be improved upon. However, over all the poem is pretty smooth..Nice job!
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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This is a very nice poem! It tells an interesting story of what you consider the best qualities of life, integrity being the most important. The rhyme is excellent but if you do a syllable count you will find the rhythm is a little inconsistent in places. That can be improved upon. However, over all the poem is pretty smooth..Nice job!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
Comment from Janie King
This is beautiful and full of so much truth..for everyone..it's a daily decision to do as God leads..live as He lives..portray the character of the Master..Great job. God bless.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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This is beautiful and full of so much truth..for everyone..it's a daily decision to do as God leads..live as He lives..portray the character of the Master..Great job. God bless.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
Comment from Matoshka
I truly loved your picture it is awesome and set the stage for your words. Honesty and integrity are so important in life to live it to the fullest. I enjoyed this so much and the message that it sends. Blessings
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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I truly loved your picture it is awesome and set the stage for your words. Honesty and integrity are so important in life to live it to the fullest. I enjoyed this so much and the message that it sends. Blessings
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
Comment from HPicasso
I really enjoyed this poem. It was very true to heart. I like the format and the words used to deliver your message. In this write you have God speaking to the youth of today. This is a lovely verse preparing your young for the years ahead. Well done!
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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I really enjoyed this poem. It was very true to heart. I like the format and the words used to deliver your message. In this write you have God speaking to the youth of today. This is a lovely verse preparing your young for the years ahead. Well done!
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
Comment from Tonulak
The message of this was a fine one. I don't know your views on poetry or your attitude towrd critique, but I'll say two things. Your lines and meter were all over the place, syllable/beat counts that varied from 8 to 11. Such a heroic theme would be well served by the "integrety" of solid meter. "Excuse me for saying, but when you refer to yourself in a like a line like, "for in my kingdom waits great reward", it's sounds like you have delusions of Godhood. I'm not saying you do, it just reads that way to me. I think the siritual message would be stronger, if you refered to "Him" instead of yourself. I can't really divine your intention, I just have to go on the written words. Just a few thoughts to ponder.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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The message of this was a fine one. I don't know your views on poetry or your attitude towrd critique, but I'll say two things. Your lines and meter were all over the place, syllable/beat counts that varied from 8 to 11. Such a heroic theme would be well served by the "integrety" of solid meter. "Excuse me for saying, but when you refer to yourself in a like a line like, "for in my kingdom waits great reward", it's sounds like you have delusions of Godhood. I'm not saying you do, it just reads that way to me. I think the siritual message would be stronger, if you refered to "Him" instead of yourself. I can't really divine your intention, I just have to go on the written words. Just a few thoughts to ponder.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
Comment from Mike K2
I honestly believe their is a price to pay when you do stand up and represent an ideal. A poem of love cost me a third of my pay, yet it launched something so much nicer for me, and I stood tall and by my words.
In regards to children, I winch at the catch phrase, "It takes a village," but in my time many adults contributed whether to show me what is really out in the real world, how I can make myself better so I walk into being an adult, or even teaching me or allowing me learn a hard lesson.
It is sad that most adults are discouraged from becoming involved in other kids lives, and it is the kids who are shrewder and find ways to take advantage of this void. The saddest thing to me is to see adults that are supposed to be mature, acting just like the kids, not seeing the responsibilities they truly should be taking.
I feel this is a well written and wonderful poem.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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I honestly believe their is a price to pay when you do stand up and represent an ideal. A poem of love cost me a third of my pay, yet it launched something so much nicer for me, and I stood tall and by my words.
In regards to children, I winch at the catch phrase, "It takes a village," but in my time many adults contributed whether to show me what is really out in the real world, how I can make myself better so I walk into being an adult, or even teaching me or allowing me learn a hard lesson.
It is sad that most adults are discouraged from becoming involved in other kids lives, and it is the kids who are shrewder and find ways to take advantage of this void. The saddest thing to me is to see adults that are supposed to be mature, acting just like the kids, not seeing the responsibilities they truly should be taking.
I feel this is a well written and wonderful poem.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
Comment from ScarletClearwater
I love the picture you chose. It's as if she is the mother, raising her family to be strong for God. And overcome the evil of life. Great job with this piece.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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I love the picture you chose. It's as if she is the mother, raising her family to be strong for God. And overcome the evil of life. Great job with this piece.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
Comment from ElizabethMary
Truth, love and honesty. It is lovely to read such a realistic and true opinion of what seems to be most important in life. Though it seems that it is easy for us to lose sight of the moral goodness of being true, honest and loving, your poem shows that negativity comes about only when we let out of our sight, what we have been taught is important from a very young age. It is interesting how you have created a framework for these ideas, in terms of a kingdom. It makes these qualities seem as though they are characters. Very well done
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Truth, love and honesty. It is lovely to read such a realistic and true opinion of what seems to be most important in life. Though it seems that it is easy for us to lose sight of the moral goodness of being true, honest and loving, your poem shows that negativity comes about only when we let out of our sight, what we have been taught is important from a very young age. It is interesting how you have created a framework for these ideas, in terms of a kingdom. It makes these qualities seem as though they are characters. Very well done
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
Comment from gazzagodbod
wow stunning presentation and love the stunning picture, was ready to walk the road of integrity with you by the end great work thanks gazza xx
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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wow stunning presentation and love the stunning picture, was ready to walk the road of integrity with you by the end great work thanks gazza xx
Comment Written 14-Dec-2011
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2012
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Many thanks to you all who wrote reviews about my poem, they were very helpful and extremely encouraging. I'm truly grateful! Sorry about replying late! Sarah
