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A Book of ... Free Verse (Vol.1)

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Metre ... Freeverse

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Comment from TammyGail
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This was a cute little witty poem
I enjoyed it ..Found My self laughing ... Lol
I loved that note as well ... :) I must so please forgive me you left yourself open... :) Does the please judge wisely mean payback is a bitch... Haha ok I'm done - I know what it means Just teasing ..
Nice picture to go along with this thanks for sharing....

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2011

reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
    Any time Tammy...
Comment from ephraim crud, COS.
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i like, i like!
madly marvellous in its
simplicity, just as
Grandpa Debonair used to say,
'don't litter your verse
with superfluous turds.
the more will out
the fewer the words'.

nice one Bicpen!
regards, eph.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2011

reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
    eph...your a genius, many thanks.
Comment from ScarletClearwater
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Like it so much better this way. I can't remember if I left five stars, but here is my updated rating. Great job with the sentence separation and funny little ditty.

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 Comment Written 18-Oct-2011

reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
    Quality, not so sure I like the moving around bit but it`s a good idea...
reply by ScarletClearwater on 18-Oct-2011
    Quality was great. i would've never known you were a newbie.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
    It actually works better your way and I think I`M GOING TO CHANGE IT...
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
    sorry that last note got sent to the wrong person...someone had a moving around idea also but thiers works for me better, but thanks anyway.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
    I think you were right...confused Bicpen....
reply by ScarletClearwater on 18-Oct-2011
    Ha ha ha, it's cool. I was going to be an editor and actually do a bit of editing on here. Most of it is personal preference, so go with your gut. But I like it the way I had it. Of course. :)~
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2011
    no worries...