Death's Sadness
A sad day.121 total reviews
Comment from Alexander E Poet
full of reflective ingredients. I enjoyed it and am amazedI like the imagery You have done a beautiful piece of work here. kind of sad, the truth within your words that makes it work well Alexander QQ
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full of reflective ingredients. I enjoyed it and am amazedI like the imagery You have done a beautiful piece of work here. kind of sad, the truth within your words that makes it work well Alexander QQ
Comment Written 15-Jun-2011
Comment from Judian James
Good Morning. I am sorry for your loss and from your words, it would appear his life affected many in a positive way universally. You conveyed your message well.
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Good Morning. I am sorry for your loss and from your words, it would appear his life affected many in a positive way universally. You conveyed your message well.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2011
Comment from manicblue
A very sensitive and kind tribute in only a few words. It met the 5-7-5 criteria and told a touching story. Best to you in the contest.
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A very sensitive and kind tribute in only a few words. It met the 5-7-5 criteria and told a touching story. Best to you in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2011
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
This is a great 5/7/5 entry to the competition with heaps of deep meaning. I really liked your turning line in the middle.
A very powerful entry... Good luck
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This is a great 5/7/5 entry to the competition with heaps of deep meaning. I really liked your turning line in the middle.
A very powerful entry... Good luck
Comment Written 15-Jun-2011
Comment from laren
Amazing, in so few words you captured the sadness of loss. The artwork is very good too. It is a poem that moves and makes think that the one who died had a good life.
Congratulations!
Laren
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Amazing, in so few words you captured the sadness of loss. The artwork is very good too. It is a poem that moves and makes think that the one who died had a good life.
Congratulations!
Laren
Comment Written 15-Jun-2011
Comment from sunnilicious
I hate death. Death sucks. But somehow, it seems to bring the best emotions out in people. And look, you pumped out such a terrific piece of poetry. Nice work. Keep it up.
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I hate death. Death sucks. But somehow, it seems to bring the best emotions out in people. And look, you pumped out such a terrific piece of poetry. Nice work. Keep it up.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2011
Comment from /*Twinkle
Loss of life is so sad because it is inevitable to all as we know. The picture and the poetry are in unison. The poetry paints the picture and the picture writes the words.
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Loss of life is so sad because it is inevitable to all as we know. The picture and the poetry are in unison. The poetry paints the picture and the picture writes the words.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2011
Comment from Econ Teacher
Did I miss something in the news? Is this for someone famous? I can see this as a poem written for a national hero or great president. Wouldn't it be nice (not the death part) if every life was valued like this.
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Did I miss something in the news? Is this for someone famous? I can see this as a poem written for a national hero or great president. Wouldn't it be nice (not the death part) if every life was valued like this.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2011
Comment from glpar
Oh, so few words to speak such volumes. It catches the sadness of losing a life great or not. I am amazed at the talent it takes to do this.
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Oh, so few words to speak such volumes. It catches the sadness of losing a life great or not. I am amazed at the talent it takes to do this.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2011
Comment from Cletus Hardiman
Sometimes a lot can be said in a few little words. I think you have accomplished this here! Thanks for a good write. Cletus Hardiman Clete
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Sometimes a lot can be said in a few little words. I think you have accomplished this here! Thanks for a good write. Cletus Hardiman Clete
Comment Written 15-Jun-2011