Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

This is very well written with a smooth flow of words. There is very good imagery and descriptive scheme. Good luck in your contest.
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"I'd watch her (your) mouth before you say something you'll be sorry for."

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2010

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2010

Charlie,

Thanks for catching that glitch..I appreciate your comments as well. Smiles, Carol

reply by c_lucas on 04-Mar-2010

You're welcome, Carol. Charlie

Comment from adewpearl

Excellent

That is one really dramatic, exciting story, Carol, that interprets the required contest opening really well - the story of the drug-induced coma and her now being put into witness protection comes off as believable, and it was cool to see the bad guys tricked caught by her friend and the police. Lots of vivid descriptive detail helps too. This should do well in this contest :-) Brooke

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 Comment Written 04-Mar-2010

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reply by the author on 04-Mar-2010

Brooke,

Wow...this review lifted my spirits almost as much as the spring blossoms you tossed my way...Thank you so much for the thoughtful comments. Smiles, Carol