Comment from Helvi2

Excellent

Hi Begin Again,
What a lovely poem of love for your son. I am saddened to know he is no longer with you, but happy you are comforted by the precious memories you had.
I love the picture you included...that is a face anyone could love.

Blessings,
Helvi :o)

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2009

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Helvi

He had an angelic face from the moment he was born with the curiousity of a mischievious boy. i was blessed to have had him. Thank you so much. Smiles, CArol

Comment from Laidy

Excellent

so very true. i loved this poem and felt so close to these words. i thought you wrote this well and with great emotion. lovely

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2009

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Laidy

Thank you for sharing Michael and the love he graced the world with. Smiles, Carol

Comment from Sarabran

Excellent

That is the greatest gift that you can receive from a child. A great gift for a mother. I liked your poem a lot. You said a lot in only a few words. Sarabran :)

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2009

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Sara

I was blessed to have him for four years and his love touches me everyday. Thank you. CArol

Comment from Nicnac

Excellent

And what a beautiful gift!
I'm so blessed by reading this, Carol. The love you carry for your precious son is conveyed so sweetly. What a beautiful boy.

Blessings and hugs, my friend.
Nic

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2009

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Nic

Thank you so much for reading and enjoying my poem. The response has been overwhelming this morning and I think my son would be smiling. He sent another gift to his mom. Thank kyou. CArol

Comment from dportwood

Excellent

Begin Again,

This message from your heart is a strong expression of love. These fifteen words portray what love is all about. Well done and good luck.

Duane

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2009

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Duane

It was easy. I was blessed to have had Michael for those short years and his love is very special. Smiles, CArol

Comment from Donald O. Cassidy

Excellent

This poem expresses something good to have emblazoned on the soul.
Of course nothing, but nothing, can substitute for this love of mother for a child.
You express a lot in so few words, and I guess that's the idea of the entry criteria.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2009

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stumbly

He was and will remain the joy of my heart forever. I may have only had him on earth for four years but he lives in my heart forever. Thank you Carol

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Carol,

I must say this must of been a very difficult Love poem to write about your wonderful looking and he semmed to be such a happy boy..
Good luck to you in this contest
Love
Gert

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2009

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Gert

He was happy all the time. I believe God loaned me his angel for a few years and then had bigger plans for him. Thank you Carol

reply by Gert sherwood on 02-Nov-2009

Carol,
Please take care.
Gert

Comment from tati

Exceptional

Dear Carol,

You're very right. Children are God's gift. In so few words, you crafted an exquisite love poem to Michael, your angel in heaven. So touching, written from your wonderful heart, with two beautiful alliterations. This is a perfect Short Love Poem entry. Good luck in the contest. (tati, Nov. 03, 2009)

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2009

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Tati

How kind of you to offer such a beautiful review and the awesome stars. They match the twinkle in his eye. I miss him more than life itself. Thank you...Carol

reply by tati on 02-Nov-2009

Wish you're here so I can hug you, Carol. With much love and prayers, tati.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

I want to let you know I just fell in love with the most adorable little blonde boy with a captivating smile. The poem wasn't bad either. Good job and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2009

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Barbara

No greater compliment could you have given me. He stole my heart away. Thanks for reading my love poem. CArol

Comment from Oatmeal

Excellent

Begin Again,

The impressions were vivid and the narration was nice. All of the lines are formatted very well. The theme was well thought out.

It is perfectly written and completely error free.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 02-Nov-2009

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Oatmeal

Thank you for your kind and appreciated comments. CArol