POEMS, SONGS AND NOTES
Viewing comments for Chapter 25 "Scrubbin' The Night Away"When I dabble at things.....
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Comment from Suzie B
Carol darlin' I'm sending you a huge smile and a case of my favorite wine...I'll tell you one day just how funny that is, I loved this, it was funny and a very sweet gesture on your part...that would be some girls night out honey. The mind boggles!
Thanks for helping me to smile.
love and hugs
Suzie
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2009
Carol darlin' I'm sending you a huge smile and a case of my favorite wine...I'll tell you one day just how funny that is, I loved this, it was funny and a very sweet gesture on your part...that would be some girls night out honey. The mind boggles!
Thanks for helping me to smile.
love and hugs
Suzie
Comment Written 25-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2009
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Suzie
If I put a smile on your face my day is made, my friend. Just doing my part to add a little cheer to my friends. I send a smile to you and hope that you will pass it on. Imagine if all the reviews tomorrow had smile faces on them...Take care...I think of you often. Smile to you :) Carol
Comment from Humrmeplz
What a fun piece this is and just a joyful escape from the seriousness of life. The obvious camaraderie between female friends just lifts the spirit. I liked the fact that this just flows so easily off the lips. Excellent choice of artwork, as well.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2009
What a fun piece this is and just a joyful escape from the seriousness of life. The obvious camaraderie between female friends just lifts the spirit. I liked the fact that this just flows so easily off the lips. Excellent choice of artwork, as well.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2009
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Hummeplz
Thank you for reading and enjoying. Just a quick uplift from all the gloom and doom. I send you a smile and hope that you will pass it on. Maybe tomorrow all the reviews will find smile faces on them.
Smiling at you...:) Carol
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Thank you and the first one I will pass will be right back to you. :~)
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HUm
Thank you You have made my day too! :) Carol
Comment from Joan E.
So this is the happy one you alluded to; thank you so much for immortalizing me and many of my FanStory friends in your song. Yes, you had me smiling from the beginning, even before I realized it was about US Girls! At the beginning, I saw some parallels with "I'm Gonna Wash that Man Write Out of My Hair," which were neat. You managed to sneak in a little seriousness (but I won't tell Shirley) about the "sticks and stones, finding bones," which I admired too. I'm sure you had fun writing these lyrics and I'm still chortling.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2009
So this is the happy one you alluded to; thank you so much for immortalizing me and many of my FanStory friends in your song. Yes, you had me smiling from the beginning, even before I realized it was about US Girls! At the beginning, I saw some parallels with "I'm Gonna Wash that Man Write Out of My Hair," which were neat. You managed to sneak in a little seriousness (but I won't tell Shirley) about the "sticks and stones, finding bones," which I admired too. I'm sure you had fun writing these lyrics and I'm still chortling.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2009
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Joan
I did..It was a joy to laugh a little and not take everything so seriously. I am glad that you found fun in it too. I shall send you a smile and hope that you will pass it on. Can you imagine all the reviews popping up with smiles on them tomorrow...Have a great day!
Smiling at you :) Carol
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What a great version of "pass it on!" I'll do my best to share smiles in my Tai Chi class this morning. Thank you for brightening our days- Joan
Comment from Colette
Oh! Carol, You haven't got the name BeginAgain for nothing and this piece proves it Woman Power! Watch out you men we
are a force to be reckoned with.
Carol you have done us all proud! If you start up a club I am
with you all the way LOL! I will be your European branch.
Well done, you gave me such a lift. Thank you friend.
Colette
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2009
Oh! Carol, You haven't got the name BeginAgain for nothing and this piece proves it Woman Power! Watch out you men we
are a force to be reckoned with.
Carol you have done us all proud! If you start up a club I am
with you all the way LOL! I will be your European branch.
Well done, you gave me such a lift. Thank you friend.
Colette
Comment Written 25-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2009
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Colette
I am so thrilled that you enjoyed the little song ...Just a bunch of silliness but oh so much better than all that gloom and doom. I'm sending you a smile girl and I hope you'll pass it on. Can you imagine if all the reviews started popping up with smiles...Take care... :)
Smiling at you, :) Carol
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for you Carol anything, I will pass it on.
Colette :)-
Comment from Oatmeal
Begin Again,
Looks like this would make a good song. LOL Maybe a fifties bop. The flow has rhythm. Looks really cute to me. I love the colors that you chose.
I saw no SPAG and no typos. It was very clean.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2009
Begin Again,
Looks like this would make a good song. LOL Maybe a fifties bop. The flow has rhythm. Looks really cute to me. I love the colors that you chose.
I saw no SPAG and no typos. It was very clean.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 25-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2009
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Oatmeal
I am so pleased that you stopped by and gave my little song a read. Thank you so much. I shall send a smile your way :) and hope that you shall pass it on. Carol
Comment from nora arjuna
hi carol. i thought this was such a fun lyric. couldn't help but smile especially when you included some of our friends name in there. thanks for cheering up my exhaustive day. :)
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2009
hi carol. i thought this was such a fun lyric. couldn't help but smile especially when you included some of our friends name in there. thanks for cheering up my exhaustive day. :)
Comment Written 25-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2009
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arjuna
thanks so much for stopping by to read my silly song lyrics. I am so pleased that you found some fun and pleasure in it. I shall send a smile your way :) and hope you pass it on. Carol
Comment from Shirley B
I love it!!!I am a star now. I made it to big time. Now doesn't that feel better! Did yo enter this into a contest? you should have. There are alot of song contest going on write now. Great job! Don't you feel all sunny now? Love Shirley.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2009
I love it!!!I am a star now. I made it to big time. Now doesn't that feel better! Did yo enter this into a contest? you should have. There are alot of song contest going on write now. Great job! Don't you feel all sunny now? Love Shirley.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2009
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Shirley
You certainly are a star in my book...And yes I feel all sunny inside. I hope that others love it too. I am trying to start a chain reaction with each of my reviews. I send a smile to them :) and suggest they pass it on. Wouldn't it be great to see little smiley faces all over the reviews? Thanks for your nudging and I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
So here's your smile:) :) :) and I hope you pass it on!
Always a friend, Carol
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Dear Carol, It would be my pleasure to pass on the smiles.:) :) :) Have a great night. shirley
Comment from FredCollingwood
I for one am tired of downer postings of any genre. This one is great--it's fun and upbeat and I enjoyed reading it. Well done.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2009
I for one am tired of downer postings of any genre. This one is great--it's fun and upbeat and I enjoyed reading it. Well done.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2009
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Fred
Thank you so so much. I appreciate your comments. I shall send a smile to you :) and I hope you will pass it on. Carol
Comment from Lastamen
What would this world be if we couldn't bend the rules sometimes and just break loose and have some fun. This little ditty is just that - a blast at a good time. The girls are busting loose and having a "wing-ding". They must be heading to Vegas where what happens there will stay there. Go for it!
Till the last amen
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2009
What would this world be if we couldn't bend the rules sometimes and just break loose and have some fun. This little ditty is just that - a blast at a good time. The girls are busting loose and having a "wing-ding". They must be heading to Vegas where what happens there will stay there. Go for it!
Till the last amen
Comment Written 24-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2009
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Lastamen
I am glad to see that you too liked the idea of just having some fun and getting rid of the blues. Thank you for the kind review. I send a smile to you :) and hope you'll pass it on. Carol
Comment from LOA7
I enjoyed it! Thanks for writing. It did put a smile on my face. When I was younger, my mother and step-grandmother cleaned newly built homes before they went on the market. I and my siblings helped out from time to time, just us gals. We had a lot of fun.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2009
I enjoyed it! Thanks for writing. It did put a smile on my face. When I was younger, my mother and step-grandmother cleaned newly built homes before they went on the market. I and my siblings helped out from time to time, just us gals. We had a lot of fun.
Comment Written 24-Sep-2009
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2009
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LOA7
thanks so much for the kind review. I am sending a smile your way :) and hope that you will pass it on. Carol