Schmekel and Clekel McGee
A funny poem82 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Harry,
This nonsense poem brings a giggle. It seems Schmeckle is a lot more outgoing and adventurous than Cleckle. But like all dogs all Freckle wants is a bone or that raccoon.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great rest of the day and week.
Joan
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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Hi Harry,
This nonsense poem brings a giggle. It seems Schmeckle is a lot more outgoing and adventurous than Cleckle. But like all dogs all Freckle wants is a bone or that raccoon.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Have a great rest of the day and week.
Joan
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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LOL! Well thank you Joan. It's all about the fun! I really appreciate your review!
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You're most kindly welcome, Harry.
Joan
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Thank you.
Comment from Ulla
And funny it was I have to admit. It was all really a bit of nonsense, but nevertheless quite funny to read. Now Feckle only wanted a home which to me make sense. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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And funny it was I have to admit. It was all really a bit of nonsense, but nevertheless quite funny to read. Now Feckle only wanted a home which to me make sense. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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LOL! Well, thank you Ulla. It's all about the fun! I really appreciate your review!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was a bit of fun, and it brought back a memory as well. We were at the fair ground, my mother, me and my sons. Mum wanted a candy floss (cotton candy) and I got her one, she took a big bite, and pulled the candy out with her false teeth hanging onto it. So funny!
I love the names you've given these funny characters. Schmekel and Clekel McGee, and their dog Freckle! Fabulous! I hope Freckle with get his bone! LOL Well done. Sandra xx
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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That was a bit of fun, and it brought back a memory as well. We were at the fair ground, my mother, me and my sons. Mum wanted a candy floss (cotton candy) and I got her one, she took a big bite, and pulled the candy out with her false teeth hanging onto it. So funny!
I love the names you've given these funny characters. Schmekel and Clekel McGee, and their dog Freckle! Fabulous! I hope Freckle with get his bone! LOL Well done. Sandra xx
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2024
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LOL! Well, thank you Sandra. It's all about the fun! I really appreciate your review!
Comment from jmdg1954
Schmekel, Clekel and Frekel individually and as a trio brought a smile to my face.
I hope to no see additional Schmekel, Clekel and Frekel stories in the future
I have so one aim as l friends I'm trying to write with and for. Your poem gave me a little kick in the A... to get moving.
Great job.
John
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Schmekel, Clekel and Frekel individually and as a trio brought a smile to my face.
I hope to no see additional Schmekel, Clekel and Frekel stories in the future
I have so one aim as l friends I'm trying to write with and for. Your poem gave me a little kick in the A... to get moving.
Great job.
John
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Well, thank you John for your review. I really appreciate it.
Comment from Begin Again
What fun! Schmekel, Clekel, and Freckle had a merry and whimsical adventure and we happily went along. It put a smile on the reader's face and enjoyment to share.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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What fun! Schmekel, Clekel, and Freckle had a merry and whimsical adventure and we happily went along. It put a smile on the reader's face and enjoyment to share.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Well, thank you Carol. I guess I have succeeded as long as it made you smile. Thank you for your review! I greatly appreciate it!
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Please drop by my neck of the woods sometime and let me know what you think about my story. Smiles, Carol
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Oh, what is the name of it?
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I am still trying to figure this whole site out lol!
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Spirited Justice! But the last two chapters are listed on the front page! I would be thrilled if you checked out my portfolio. Thanks so much!
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I've bee here forever it seems and sometimes I too am trying to figure things out. LOL
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o.k. I will do that!
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
This poem has a delightful and whimsical quality that makes it engaging and fun to read. The playful tone and rhythmic structure really bring Schmekel, Clekel, and Freckle to life. You've captured a lighthearted snapshot of their adventures in a charming way.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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This poem has a delightful and whimsical quality that makes it engaging and fun to read. The playful tone and rhythmic structure really bring Schmekel, Clekel, and Freckle to life. You've captured a lighthearted snapshot of their adventures in a charming way.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Well, thank you Patty. I really appreciate the kind words and your review!
Comment from LJbutterfly
Does Dufus and Rufus know Schmekel, Clekel, and Freckle. I see you enjoy writing in rhyme, about humorous eccentric characters with dogs. With all the funny shenanigans of Schmekel and Clekel, your last line summed it up with "all Freckle wanted was a bone.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Does Dufus and Rufus know Schmekel, Clekel, and Freckle. I see you enjoy writing in rhyme, about humorous eccentric characters with dogs. With all the funny shenanigans of Schmekel and Clekel, your last line summed it up with "all Freckle wanted was a bone.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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LOL! Well, thank you LJButterfly! I really appreciate your review!
Comment from Barry Penfold
It is a funny poem. Made me smile all the while and I love the names of the animals. Love the photo and thanks for sharing. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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It is a funny poem. Made me smile all the while and I love the names of the animals. Love the photo and thanks for sharing. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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LOL! Well, thank you Barry for your review! I really appreciate it!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem is such a fun read! The playful rhythm works so well in your poem. And the quirky characters made me smile. I loved how each one had their own unique charm. It's the kind of poem that brings a bit of light hearted joy to the day. Well done!
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Your poem is such a fun read! The playful rhythm works so well in your poem. And the quirky characters made me smile. I loved how each one had their own unique charm. It's the kind of poem that brings a bit of light hearted joy to the day. Well done!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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LOL! Well, thank you Michael for your kind words and review! I really appreciate that!
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Harry
This effort is one of your best efforts
It has very good rhythm and rhyme, but no set meter
It's kind of the same thing you used on the other poem you wrote about the two guys and the dog
I think this is a better effort which shows that you listen and you learn and you respond to that very well
So I'm glad that people gave you constructive criticism on that because you show that you listened. I'm repeating myself here because of the stark difference between the two poems. Oh yeah, the other one was about dufus and Rufus and it did not have much rhythm to it
I'm impressed at how far you've progressed. I just made a rhyme didn't I?
Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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Hi, Harry
This effort is one of your best efforts
It has very good rhythm and rhyme, but no set meter
It's kind of the same thing you used on the other poem you wrote about the two guys and the dog
I think this is a better effort which shows that you listen and you learn and you respond to that very well
So I'm glad that people gave you constructive criticism on that because you show that you listened. I'm repeating myself here because of the stark difference between the two poems. Oh yeah, the other one was about dufus and Rufus and it did not have much rhythm to it
I'm impressed at how far you've progressed. I just made a rhyme didn't I?
Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 19-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2024
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LOL! Yes you did Pam. Thank you for your review! I really appreciate it!
