Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

I do the same thing. I can write about anything but can't express it verbally. It takes a lot of concentration to do a reading. What a wonderfully written poem.

Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022

thank you mike :)

Comment from Ashley Shipley

Excellent

A very relatable and beautifully written poem. I particularly like the final line of 'bled'. It conjures up the idea that in creating art we must dig deep inside ourselves and bring forth painful memories and concepts.

Well done and good luck with the contest!

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022

cool! thank you ashley :)

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

No matter how you say it, write it or otherwise display it. Your thoughts are valuable and worthy of being shared. You must never allow shyness to get in the way of sharing the things on your mind and in your heart. Those thought are inspired sayings that someone, maybe even everyone needs to hear.

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 Comment Written 18-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022

thank you nomi :-)