October Sun
Remembering autumn76 total reviews
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written work dear Janet, this is beautiful. Hovering between wistful and anticipation, it's got great language, smooth flow, with abab rhyming and hexametric stanzas, well done dear girl, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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A beautifully written work dear Janet, this is beautiful. Hovering between wistful and anticipation, it's got great language, smooth flow, with abab rhyming and hexametric stanzas, well done dear girl, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2021
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Thank you Roy for your encouraging review and for those special stars. I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this one.
Blessings and stay well my friend.
Janet
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Well earned Janet.
Comment from Lyn Peters
You captured October so beautifully, in this work. Autumn is, by far, my favorite time of the year and I suspect, when the next October rolls around I'll be reminded of your lovely poem. Thank you for sharing this reminder of those wonderful, crisp days and nights. Wishing you good health and happy writing.
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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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You captured October so beautifully, in this work. Autumn is, by far, my favorite time of the year and I suspect, when the next October rolls around I'll be reminded of your lovely poem. Thank you for sharing this reminder of those wonderful, crisp days and nights. Wishing you good health and happy writing.
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Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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First - welcome to FS and thank you for your kind review,
Janet
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem speaks the glory of the season, remembering autumn and its beauty, rainy, cloudy and shinny; leaves fall from the trees; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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This poem speaks the glory of the season, remembering autumn and its beauty, rainy, cloudy and shinny; leaves fall from the trees; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you ALCREATOR for your encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is a Beautifully written poem about autumn. It is nice to remember other seasons. October's sun has set behind the lofty hills and left a sea of smoky clouds. Both grey and pink. They linger in the autumn sky and give me chills. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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This is a Beautifully written poem about autumn. It is nice to remember other seasons. October's sun has set behind the lofty hills and left a sea of smoky clouds. Both grey and pink. They linger in the autumn sky and give me chills. Nicely done.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you ajoanne for your encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Anne Johnston
A very easy-reading poem about Autumn. Rhyming is great. On this cold, January day, it is nice to remember the warm days we had in Autumn. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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A very easy-reading poem about Autumn. Rhyming is great. On this cold, January day, it is nice to remember the warm days we had in Autumn. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you Anne for your encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
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You are very welcome
Comment from Y. M. Roger
What a lovely romanticization of a season that is usually only envisioned through the colorful leaves at its beginning... well done, Janet!! ;) You make even someone not fond of the colder months smile with your rhythmic offering, my lady! ;) Yvette
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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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What a lovely romanticization of a season that is usually only envisioned through the colorful leaves at its beginning... well done, Janet!! ;) You make even someone not fond of the colder months smile with your rhythmic offering, my lady! ;) Yvette
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Comment Written 27-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your most encouraging review. I?m not excited about the cold either (we now live in the south - :)))) but I love the colors of fall.
So glad you enjoyed it.
Blessings
Janet