Rain, Rain Go Away
A day from rain to clear skies75 total reviews
Comment from Anne Johnston
I like your title, Rain, rain go away. And you have given us a good picture of how our attitudes change when a rainy day is over, and stars fill the sky once again.
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I like your title, Rain, rain go away. And you have given us a good picture of how our attitudes change when a rainy day is over, and stars fill the sky once again.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
Comment from royowen
"Bucking the trend" is probably meant for anyone who "kicks against the goads" of their own convention. But this is beautifully written, an observational beauty my friend, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : light(n)ing?
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"Bucking the trend" is probably meant for anyone who "kicks against the goads" of their own convention. But this is beautifully written, an observational beauty my friend, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : light(n)ing?
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
Comment from Erika Seshadri
Very nice! I love poetry. I'm somewhat new to the site. Feel free to come see the handful of work I've posted so far. I look forward to reading more of your listings. Good luck in the contest!
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Very nice! I love poetry. I'm somewhat new to the site. Feel free to come see the handful of work I've posted so far. I look forward to reading more of your listings. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
Comment from Rosalie Lawrence
Nicely done - and you used all the assigned words so well. That was indeed a monsoon, although I have never experienced one, yet for the sky to clear so quickly that one can see stars would be quite an experience.
I'm glad she got in out of the rain. I'm glad her day finished with exhilaration. You should be proud to put your name to this. Write on!
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Nicely done - and you used all the assigned words so well. That was indeed a monsoon, although I have never experienced one, yet for the sky to clear so quickly that one can see stars would be quite an experience.
I'm glad she got in out of the rain. I'm glad her day finished with exhilaration. You should be proud to put your name to this. Write on!
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are interesting, descriptive and creative. I like how the author used the words of this contest. The poem flows and connects well.
The artwork compliments both the theme and words of this poem.
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The author's words are interesting, descriptive and creative. I like how the author used the words of this contest. The poem flows and connects well.
The artwork compliments both the theme and words of this poem.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2021