Eternity's Embrace
Accept it, my child, and spread your wings...67 total reviews
Comment from Mark D. R.
Yvette,
A most dramatic artwork pairs up with lovely written contest entry. I am spreading my wings and open to new ideas for this day. Thanks for your opportunity to explore.
Mark
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Yvette,
A most dramatic artwork pairs up with lovely written contest entry. I am spreading my wings and open to new ideas for this day. Thanks for your opportunity to explore.
Mark
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Glad you enjoyed the artwork, Mark -- thanx for stopping in! ;) Have a great day! ;)
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
You are right I suppose...what we take on face value as forgiveness can be more than a shelter for the future. When you make amends with someone and try to start anew...that someone can also be a strength for you to lean upon!
A good little poem that is quite deep. Best wishes for the contest!
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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You are right I suppose...what we take on face value as forgiveness can be more than a shelter for the future. When you make amends with someone and try to start anew...that someone can also be a strength for you to lean upon!
A good little poem that is quite deep. Best wishes for the contest!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Thanx so much, Aaqib, for your review and comments here... Have a Terrific Tuesday!! ;) ;) Yvette
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You are most welcome! :-)
Comment from Debbie Pope
I hope you are not tired of hearing this yet, but you have another winner. There are a handful of writers on FanStory that could take all the prizes. You're one of the leaders of that pack. But the committee clearly tries to spread the prize. So, this one may not win. It should though. You captured forgiveness in a way that makes me want to fly with happiness and freedom.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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I hope you are not tired of hearing this yet, but you have another winner. There are a handful of writers on FanStory that could take all the prizes. You're one of the leaders of that pack. But the committee clearly tries to spread the prize. So, this one may not win. It should though. You captured forgiveness in a way that makes me want to fly with happiness and freedom.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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My inspiration, MQ -- that's you!! Thank you, THANK YOU!! ;) :) I'm so glad you think so, but I promise not to hold my breath on it - LOL! ;) Forgiveness is one of those two-edged swords that cuts the bonds of both parties, yeah? The world could use a whole lot more of it rather than the 'live in vengeance' mode of social media... sigh. Have a Terrific Tuesday down there, my beautiful friend and STAY DRY!! ;) ;) Yvette :)
Comment from Bicpen
Excellent ...
It has at the centre a true confession of the heart forgiveness is an act of progression that allows us not to rest on our laurels that belongs to salvation the strength to fly is the hope which is invigorated in us through this forgiveness and delivers the strength much needed for another day ...
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Excellent ...
It has at the centre a true confession of the heart forgiveness is an act of progression that allows us not to rest on our laurels that belongs to salvation the strength to fly is the hope which is invigorated in us through this forgiveness and delivers the strength much needed for another day ...
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Thanx so much, George, for your review here... forgiveness is one of those two-edged swords that cuts the bonds of both parties, yeah? Think the world could use a whole lot more of it rather than the 'live in vengeance' mode of social media... sigh. Have a Terrific Tuesday!! ;) ;) Yvette
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social media could be classed as the salvation ... lol.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Provocative and well stated.
Forgiveness will indeed loosen the chains that bind and set one free allowing misdeeds to not hinder them with unnecessary burdens.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Provocative and well stated.
Forgiveness will indeed loosen the chains that bind and set one free allowing misdeeds to not hinder them with unnecessary burdens.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Thanx so much, Brett, for your review here... Have a Terrific Tuesday!! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Ricky1024
"Eternity's Embrace"
Is a 15 Syllable Poem Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks and good luck with this
Doctor Ricky 1024
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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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"Eternity's Embrace"
Is a 15 Syllable Poem Contest Entry.
Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
..
The Adjective and Objective Contents were both Excellent and Exceptional while Descriptive Measures aligned Perfectly.
Thanks and good luck with this
Doctor Ricky 1024
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Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Thanx so much, Doctor Ricky, for your review here... Have a Terrific Tuesday!! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Sally Law
A fine offering for the fifteen syllable poetry contest, dear Yvette. Beautifully penned and illustrated with truth within. God's forgiveness gives our spirits flight!
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest,
Sally xoxo
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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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A fine offering for the fifteen syllable poetry contest, dear Yvette. Beautifully penned and illustrated with truth within. God's forgiveness gives our spirits flight!
Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the contest,
Sally xoxo
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Comment Written 10-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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Thanx so much, Lady Sal, for your review here... forgiveness is one of those two-edged swords that cuts the bonds of both parties, yeah? Think the world could use a whole lot more of it rather than the 'live in vengeance' mode of social media... sigh. Have a Terrific Tuesday!! ;) ;) Yvette