In Vase of Blue
Nonet: Memory's Essence68 total reviews
Comment from Debbie Pope
I can't believe that I am awarding a nonet a six star rating. Usually I don't particularly enjoy them. This one is so lovely though. You use the format to your advantage and tell a poignant story. Something in the narrator's past has given meaning to those nodding narcissus. Inhaling the scent brings it flooding back to him.
This one is moving, Diane. Thank you for sharing and for showing me how nonets should be done.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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I can't believe that I am awarding a nonet a six star rating. Usually I don't particularly enjoy them. This one is so lovely though. You use the format to your advantage and tell a poignant story. Something in the narrator's past has given meaning to those nodding narcissus. Inhaling the scent brings it flooding back to him.
This one is moving, Diane. Thank you for sharing and for showing me how nonets should be done.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Dear Debbie!
Please accept my sincere apologies for being so late in my reply!
I am deeply honored by your exceptional rating and complimentary review.
My mother was such a positive and dynamic force in my life. February is her birthday month. She is never more than a thought away...especially when daffodils bloom...
Thank you again!
diane
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
The loss of our parents is hard for those of us who were truly loved by them. We grieve, we rise above our grief and enjoy the fun and happy memories. And then, on their birthdays, holidays, or just out of nowhere, we grieve again. And there is beauty in that grief because it means we never stopped loving them.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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The loss of our parents is hard for those of us who were truly loved by them. We grieve, we rise above our grief and enjoy the fun and happy memories. And then, on their birthdays, holidays, or just out of nowhere, we grieve again. And there is beauty in that grief because it means we never stopped loving them.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Hello!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you!
diane
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You are welcome.
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
This was both beautiful and sad at the same time! I loved how you described this beautiful scene and how it brings back the memories of your mother! So sorry for your loss! May she rest in peace!
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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This was both beautiful and sad at the same time! I loved how you described this beautiful scene and how it brings back the memories of your mother! So sorry for your loss! May she rest in peace!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Hello Aaqib!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you!
diane
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You are most welcome! :-)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
presentation, diane.
-This is a lovely poem
in honor of your mother.
-I like the two lines about
the narcissus "clustered
in vase of blue."
-The ending lines make
the poem very touching
and show your deep love
for your mom, and how
she is missed.
-I bet she is saying
this is a really nice poem
you wrote for me, and it
came with flowers, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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-Nice image and
presentation, diane.
-This is a lovely poem
in honor of your mother.
-I like the two lines about
the narcissus "clustered
in vase of blue."
-The ending lines make
the poem very touching
and show your deep love
for your mom, and how
she is missed.
-I bet she is saying
this is a really nice poem
you wrote for me, and it
came with flowers, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Dear Pam,
Please accept my sincerest apologies for being so late in my reply.
Thank you for your excellent rating and thoughtful review.
My mother was a master floral designer. Everything I know of flowers, gardening, and beauty I learned from her. She was such a positive and dynamic force in my life. Daffodils were her favorite Springtime flower. She is never more than a thought away...especially when daffodils are in bloom...
Thank you again!
diane
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You are very welcome, diane, and there is no problem about the reply. Thanks for sharing your reply. It is appreciated.
Comment from L. R. Jensen
This is a great entry for the nonet contest. I like the images of her essence greeting you, and the nodding narcissuses. Your words paint a very real picture and your ending is very relatable. Great job and good luck!
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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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This is a great entry for the nonet contest. I like the images of her essence greeting you, and the nodding narcissuses. Your words paint a very real picture and your ending is very relatable. Great job and good luck!
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Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Hello L.R.!
So pleased my words resonated with you!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That is a lovely tribute nonet poem for your mother, and so beautifully worded. We never quite lose them, do we? I feel my mother nearby when I miss her the most, which is almost all the time! I'm sure your mother is watching over you and has read this poem and smiled. You've written a lovely contest entry, my friend. Good luck! :)) Sandra xxx
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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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That is a lovely tribute nonet poem for your mother, and so beautifully worded. We never quite lose them, do we? I feel my mother nearby when I miss her the most, which is almost all the time! I'm sure your mother is watching over you and has read this poem and smiled. You've written a lovely contest entry, my friend. Good luck! :)) Sandra xxx
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Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Hello Sandra,
I apologize for the lateness of my reply!
So pleased my words resonated with you!
Thank you!
diane
Comment from June Sargent
I know the feeling. My mom loved gardenias. And whenever I smell that sweet vanilla scent, my heart skips a beat. They are always with us in our hearts. Beautiful and touching piece.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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I know the feeling. My mom loved gardenias. And whenever I smell that sweet vanilla scent, my heart skips a beat. They are always with us in our hearts. Beautiful and touching piece.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Dear June!
Please accept my sincere apologies for this late reply to your review!
I am thrilled that you find this offering exceptional. Thank you for such a positive rating and heartfelt review.
My mother was a master floral designer. Daffodils were her favorite Springtime flower. Everything I know of flowers, gardening, and beauty I learned from her. She is never more than a thought away...especially when daffodils are blooming...
Thank you again!
diane
P.S.
Feeling better?
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Yes, I actually am starting to feel more human than robotic! Better each day. Thanks for asking!
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Good to know, June!
Take Care!
diane
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"In Vase of Blue", is an extremely well-written and heart-wrenching piece. To me, this is definitely a six.This talented poet's work was a pleasure to read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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"In Vase of Blue", is an extremely well-written and heart-wrenching piece. To me, this is definitely a six.This talented poet's work was a pleasure to read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post
Comment Written 16-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
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Hello Duchess!
Please accept my sincere apologies for this late reply!
I am deeply honored by your exceptional rating and complimentary review!
So pleased my words resonated with you!
Daffodils were my mother's favorite Springtime flower...
Thank you again!
diane
Hello diane.
Apology accepted. Late is better than never.
God bless and best wishes,
the Duchess :)))
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Thank you for understanding, Duchess!
diane
dianne,
I do my best.
God bless and take care,
the Duchess :)))
