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Comment from Badger_29
And wonderful rendition a father and son that's a lot of parallels to scripture. I like how your description is Brie therefore making the reader fill in the blanks about where they are what happened to their land. I love how the father taught the son the value of water and then the sun to confine himself together with pockets. I liked best the author notes because it made this type of fictional writing appeal to everybody with a strong message. I believe all religions per se are all right because there's so many different type of people I may need different versions pure spirituality and connection to God is not a religion. I really enjoy your works and tell her shipping with you here you have been a great source of inspiration and support. I am honored by your writing and reviews.
Blessings,
Brother Badger cull
Darren
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And wonderful rendition a father and son that's a lot of parallels to scripture. I like how your description is Brie therefore making the reader fill in the blanks about where they are what happened to their land. I love how the father taught the son the value of water and then the sun to confine himself together with pockets. I liked best the author notes because it made this type of fictional writing appeal to everybody with a strong message. I believe all religions per se are all right because there's so many different type of people I may need different versions pure spirituality and connection to God is not a religion. I really enjoy your works and tell her shipping with you here you have been a great source of inspiration and support. I am honored by your writing and reviews.
Blessings,
Brother Badger cull
Darren
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written story to teach everyone the value of life. When everything goes well we cannot see how valuable life is, when it is taken from us for a while or for ever we learn the real value of the life we lost.
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A very well-written story to teach everyone the value of life. When everything goes well we cannot see how valuable life is, when it is taken from us for a while or for ever we learn the real value of the life we lost.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi I love the meal in this story. Indeed we waste a lot of water. When me I must admit I cannot help it, when I do the washing.
And somewhere a lot of people are crying for just a few drops a day.
Well done and congrats for teasing the minds of water wasters.
Benny
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Hi I love the meal in this story. Indeed we waste a lot of water. When me I must admit I cannot help it, when I do the washing.
And somewhere a lot of people are crying for just a few drops a day.
Well done and congrats for teasing the minds of water wasters.
Benny
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork you choose for your poem, it is a perfect match
you captured my attention from the first line to the last.
There is a very important lesson to learn in this story.
This is what I call a food for thought poem thank you for sharing
Cookie
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I love the artwork you choose for your poem, it is a perfect match
you captured my attention from the first line to the last.
There is a very important lesson to learn in this story.
This is what I call a food for thought poem thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 12-Jul-2019
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, water is the source of all life, it nurtures the food that nourishes our bodies, it should teach us gratitude for the things God has given us, and the humble thankfulness we should have for the blessing it brings, there's nothing more tragic, or appearing to be judgement of us, than water's absence, we'll dine, good sharing, blessings, Roy
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Oh yes, water is the source of all life, it nurtures the food that nourishes our bodies, it should teach us gratitude for the things God has given us, and the humble thankfulness we should have for the blessing it brings, there's nothing more tragic, or appearing to be judgement of us, than water's absence, we'll dine, good sharing, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
Comment from tfawcus
This contains the advice and wisdom of cherishing our valuable water resources, a lesson that becomes increasingly urgent for us to pass on to the next generation.
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This contains the advice and wisdom of cherishing our valuable water resources, a lesson that becomes increasingly urgent for us to pass on to the next generation.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
Comment from robyn corum
ALD,
I really enjoyed this short story about people who love God and live to learn lessons from Him. They know that He is all mighty and that He provides all things. Thanks!
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ALD,
I really enjoyed this short story about people who love God and live to learn lessons from Him. They know that He is all mighty and that He provides all things. Thanks!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019
Comment from Raul1
I have enjoyed reading this story about God. Father and son talk about fetching life itself. Interesting story. No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
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I have enjoyed reading this story about God. Father and son talk about fetching life itself. Interesting story. No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing!
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2019