God Omnipotent Deeds
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Comment from BermyBye50
A positive and uplifting message encouraging everyone to make changes to try to make the world a better place for all of us to live. Sadly the human heart and mankind's innate nature will always resist the challenge of faith as we did at the beginning in the Garden.
Continue to offer positive messages. Maybe one day they will be fulfilled.
All the best,
BermyBye50
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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A positive and uplifting message encouraging everyone to make changes to try to make the world a better place for all of us to live. Sadly the human heart and mankind's innate nature will always resist the challenge of faith as we did at the beginning in the Garden.
Continue to offer positive messages. Maybe one day they will be fulfilled.
All the best,
BermyBye50
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this good review I appreciate.
Comment from Kerry Foley
You did a great job on the usage of these words for the contest. Making a terrific statement. It so very true. Nicely done from beginning to end. Good luck!
~Kerry
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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You did a great job on the usage of these words for the contest. Making a terrific statement. It so very true. Nicely done from beginning to end. Good luck!
~Kerry
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this good review.
Comment from Van
Wonderful thought Alcreator Litt Dear. It would be so much better if there were a way to implement such a concept without the destruction of humanity itself. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Wonderful thought Alcreator Litt Dear. It would be so much better if there were a way to implement such a concept without the destruction of humanity itself. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Wouldn't it be wonderful if everyone could behave in this way? It seems mankind gets worse, but without God that is what happens. Man is inherently evil, sadly, and in need of a savior. I hope you do well in this contest also. Rox
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Wouldn't it be wonderful if everyone could behave in this way? It seems mankind gets worse, but without God that is what happens. Man is inherently evil, sadly, and in need of a savior. I hope you do well in this contest also. Rox
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this good review.
Comment from Lady Jane
I took the liberty of attempting to clean up sentence structure while maintaining your message - I hope this helps:
We're losing human values, like patience and perseverance, thus we must avoid taking irrational, immoral, unethical actions, cease committing criminal activities, and change our attitudes towards love and trust for everyone, have faith in God, saving humanity and our civilization. - just a suggestion. Nothing to dock a star for. The beginning just felt off so I revised it and this happened, LOL. funny how when you change one word, the rest are sure to follow. Good luck in the contest The message is strong, correct, and well presented. Again, just a suggestion, not requirement.
Janelle
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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I took the liberty of attempting to clean up sentence structure while maintaining your message - I hope this helps:
We're losing human values, like patience and perseverance, thus we must avoid taking irrational, immoral, unethical actions, cease committing criminal activities, and change our attitudes towards love and trust for everyone, have faith in God, saving humanity and our civilization. - just a suggestion. Nothing to dock a star for. The beginning just felt off so I revised it and this happened, LOL. funny how when you change one word, the rest are sure to follow. Good luck in the contest The message is strong, correct, and well presented. Again, just a suggestion, not requirement.
Janelle
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
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Thanks.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This a great commentary of the needs of people. You hit the nail on the head with this post. It's an excellent entry in the Make a Better World contest. Good luck, my friend.
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This a great commentary of the needs of people. You hit the nail on the head with this post. It's an excellent entry in the Make a Better World contest. Good luck, my friend.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this fair review.
Comment from dmt1967
This is a good poem about humanity and society. The human in humanity is sadly missing at the moment and we need to get it back to save a society we can be proud of. Great poem message and thank you for sharing.
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This is a good poem about humanity and society. The human in humanity is sadly missing at the moment and we need to get it back to save a society we can be proud of. Great poem message and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
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Thanks for this review.
Comment from royowen
Yes, I think a lot of old values have vanished and have been replaced by the most artificial values of political correctness, now children call their elders by their first names. Beautifully written entry in this writing contest, well done, Roy
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Yes, I think a lot of old values have vanished and have been replaced by the most artificial values of political correctness, now children call their elders by their first names. Beautifully written entry in this writing contest, well done, Roy
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this super review I appreciate.
Comment from misscookie
I have no more stars to give
You captured my attention from the artwork to your powerful word
Those are the very word I said about our president and I will pray for him for he needs help!
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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I have no more stars to give
You captured my attention from the artwork to your powerful word
Those are the very word I said about our president and I will pray for him for he needs help!
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
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Thanks for this review.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Alcreator Litt Dear, a great contest with some very strong key words that need to be remembered and reminded, more so nowadays. The world is changing too fast! Your message is powerful and clear. A collective shift to make a better world today for long term happiness tomorrow is needed.
Good luck in the competition. ~DD
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Alcreator Litt Dear, a great contest with some very strong key words that need to be remembered and reminded, more so nowadays. The world is changing too fast! Your message is powerful and clear. A collective shift to make a better world today for long term happiness tomorrow is needed.
Good luck in the competition. ~DD
Comment Written 01-Aug-2018
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2018
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Thank you for this great review I appreciate.