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Comment from DR DIP
Wow, Wow I give you a 6 for the set out alone i love it I love the way you have the 4 stanzas of the poem in various fonts and colours very effective. your phrasing is sublime I really do love it
dip
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Wow, Wow I give you a 6 for the set out alone i love it I love the way you have the 4 stanzas of the poem in various fonts and colours very effective. your phrasing is sublime I really do love it
dip
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting free verse poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest my friend. Blessings, Teri
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This is a very interesting free verse poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with the art work. Best wishes in the contest my friend. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt poem in four parts. Different things will happen to our ashes and it will also gave different effects on our thoughts and feelings. One thing can't be changed is the deep and true love for a loved one.
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A very well-written heartfelt poem in four parts. Different things will happen to our ashes and it will also gave different effects on our thoughts and feelings. One thing can't be changed is the deep and true love for a loved one.
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Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
