Life, Love, and Other Disasters
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "An angel flew from heaven"A collection of poems on these themes
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Comment from nancyjam
I wish a wasn't out of sixes - this is truly lovely.
Your worked those repeating lines in perfectly
with smooth transition.
the thoughts expressed about your "angel"
couldn't be sweeter.
This stands a good chance of winning. I wish
you the best in the contest.
Nancy
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2016
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I wish a wasn't out of sixes - this is truly lovely.
Your worked those repeating lines in perfectly
with smooth transition.
the thoughts expressed about your "angel"
couldn't be sweeter.
This stands a good chance of winning. I wish
you the best in the contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 27-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2016
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Thanks, Nancy for the generous review and virtual six. Why do I always seem to post my best pieces late in the week?
Steve
Comment from Joyce Long
Good luck in the Love poem poetry contest. This seems to be a tribute to someone. At our wedding...an angel flew from heaven. Wonderful words of love and admiration. My husband is my angel after all these years. God has made us one. I am so blessed. I certainly enjoyed reading this love poem.
Joyce 01-27-16
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2016
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Good luck in the Love poem poetry contest. This seems to be a tribute to someone. At our wedding...an angel flew from heaven. Wonderful words of love and admiration. My husband is my angel after all these years. God has made us one. I am so blessed. I certainly enjoyed reading this love poem.
Joyce 01-27-16
Comment Written 27-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2016
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Joyce, thanks for the kind words - I've been married 41 years - can you beat that?
Steve
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Steve, 41 years is an accomplishment. Congratulations. Sorry, I've been married 63 years and we dated for 4 yrs. Joyce
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Wow! Very few are going to top that.
Comment from Douglas Paul
Well done. The flow was good, the rhyme seemed unforced,and I like the point of view you took - having a conversation with God about one of his angels - now yours I take it
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Well done. The flow was good, the rhyme seemed unforced,and I like the point of view you took - having a conversation with God about one of his angels - now yours I take it
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Comment Written 27-Jan-2016
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Thanks, Douglas.
My angel and I are getting a bit long in the tooth now...
Steve
Comment from Joy Graham
Oh goody, a new post in my inbox from kiwisteveh! Super goody, it's a rondeau redouble. I love this poetry form. Such a lovely love theme. No doubt for your wife? Lovely iambic pentameter. Terrific repeating lines that work in the second time flawlessly. Great rhymes. Best wishes in this contest!
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Oh goody, a new post in my inbox from kiwisteveh! Super goody, it's a rondeau redouble. I love this poetry form. Such a lovely love theme. No doubt for your wife? Lovely iambic pentameter. Terrific repeating lines that work in the second time flawlessly. Great rhymes. Best wishes in this contest!
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Comment Written 27-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2016
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Thanks, Joy.
As you know, I enjoy this form, and I hope I'm getting better at it.
Steve