Comment from chasennov

Excellent

A Gobbledegooks Story in a Poem "Cake of the Year" And I hope it won't be the last chapter in your book. This poem is so good I think it should win you top prize if the adjudicators know their stuff. Very well done.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2015

Thank you! Yes, you were right, we have a winner.

Five chapters in the book now - gotta keep going till I get Hilda and Rupert married off.

Steve

reply by chasennov on 26-Dec-2015

You are most welcome, Steve. Kind regards.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

I can see the faces of children as the parents are reading this to their little ones. Children like this kind of thing with the funny nonsense names for various things. Patricia

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 Comment Written 19-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Dec-2015

Thanks, Patricia - I had a lot of fun riting it too.

Steve