A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "I Am Your Canvas"Assorted poems of love
76 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
HI Missy, I love the way you use your body ...your love as a work of art...so very sensual...so touching....love your poem...and your colors and the picture are stunning...very well done...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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HI Missy, I love the way you use your body ...your love as a work of art...so very sensual...so touching....love your poem...and your colors and the picture are stunning...very well done...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 01-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Linda thank you so very much hon, for this luscious review.
I am smiling now... You made my day :)
Always,
Missy
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HI Missy, I am so glad I could make your day sweet girl...so glad your smiling...love your poem...luff xxoo
Comment from Mastery
Hi, Missy. Very nice indeed. I love your text and background btw.
" Paint my large brown eyes with earthiness
of your scent, Sprinkle flecks of gold in my eyes to reflect my desire
for you shining there, Splash my cheeks rose petal
pink for the look of satisfaction
your love fills me with"
Loved these lines especially well. Bob
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Hi, Missy. Very nice indeed. I love your text and background btw.
" Paint my large brown eyes with earthiness
of your scent, Sprinkle flecks of gold in my eyes to reflect my desire
for you shining there, Splash my cheeks rose petal
pink for the look of satisfaction
your love fills me with"
Loved these lines especially well. Bob
Comment Written 01-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Oh Bob...big ol smooch for this awesome review :). I am sorry I have been lagging in my reading and reviewing of my favorite authors. A big pine fell across one of the shop bays and been clearing that thing and fixin a trailer for an old friend that that has fallen on hard times. While not rich by any means...we do have running water which this guy didn't. But bout caught up and will be back more regular now...I hope.
Always,
Missy
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Take your time, Missy. I am not going anywhere. Bob
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Comment from Dawn Munro
OH WOW! Your wonderful poem outshines that most magnificent artwork! I simply LOVE this elegant poem (AND that beautiful painting) - YOU paint the scene beautifully - the art merely adorns a masterpiece.
I only wish I had a six left this week!
*******************OUTSTANDING!**********************
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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OH WOW! Your wonderful poem outshines that most magnificent artwork! I simply LOVE this elegant poem (AND that beautiful painting) - YOU paint the scene beautifully - the art merely adorns a masterpiece.
I only wish I had a six left this week!
*******************OUTSTANDING!**********************
Comment Written 01-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Thank you, Precious :) You honor me with this splendid review!!! The 6 is lovely to get so I will see this as a virtual one...how's that!!! HUGS!!
Always,
Missy
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Very definitely, YES. SIX stars!!! :)
Comment from patcelaw
I was the canvas for my hubby, He painted my soul with soft strokes of color even in the dark times of his illness he was always a thoughtful mate. He gave me the wings to fly. Patricia
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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I was the canvas for my hubby, He painted my soul with soft strokes of color even in the dark times of his illness he was always a thoughtful mate. He gave me the wings to fly. Patricia
Comment Written 01-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Patricia thank you for sharing that with me. It touches me to know that my work brought a lovely memory to you :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from scongrove
I love this Missy! :) Your words go perfect with the artwork. I would actually love to have this whole piece framed on a wall. You really took a picture and made it come to life. Love how you expressed the colors with feelings. This is just absolutely beautiful.
Shana :)
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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I love this Missy! :) Your words go perfect with the artwork. I would actually love to have this whole piece framed on a wall. You really took a picture and made it come to life. Love how you expressed the colors with feelings. This is just absolutely beautiful.
Shana :)
Comment Written 01-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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I am just overwhelmed with your response Shana!! Thank you hon! It would be a stunning piece to have in a frame :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from mfowler
I liked your diamante styled verse very much. You being adventurous in structure and expanding the metaphor purposefully throughout. The poem reads well with imagery both sweet and compelling. An excellent piece.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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I liked your diamante styled verse very much. You being adventurous in structure and expanding the metaphor purposefully throughout. The poem reads well with imagery both sweet and compelling. An excellent piece.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Your review is always the one I look forward to :)
Thank you, Mark.
The 6 is priceless to me, because it came from you!
Always,
Missy
Comment from Jean Lutz
Radiant light from within poured out on a canvas with words so others might see. Now this is pure poetry. AND pure love.
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Radiant light from within poured out on a canvas with words so others might see. Now this is pure poetry. AND pure love.
Comment Written 01-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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My my what a simply wonderful review Jean!! Thank you so much!
Always,
Missy
Comment from Jay Squires
My, Missy. You are always in love. To me that means you are in love with love.
I particularly liked the shape of your poem and the color against the black background
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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My, Missy. You are always in love. To me that means you are in love with love.
I particularly liked the shape of your poem and the color against the black background
Comment Written 01-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Busted...lol
I think you are right Jay, but isn't it a wonderful emotion. :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from A TARNISHED KNIGHT
Now I really like this..You show how much passion you have in your words. Now if I must say a couple of things that might improve this...Love is a great word but when you use it too many times it can lose a lot of its impact on what you are trying to develop... 5th line in "as your "LOVE" AS YOUR PALLET" think it might read better As your passion as your pallet. Love was used 4 times sweeti in a rather short prose. Try and eliminate one more of them..I think all the rest is purrrfect and it is another one showing how far you have progressed since the first one you posted..
hugs TK
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Now I really like this..You show how much passion you have in your words. Now if I must say a couple of things that might improve this...Love is a great word but when you use it too many times it can lose a lot of its impact on what you are trying to develop... 5th line in "as your "LOVE" AS YOUR PALLET" think it might read better As your passion as your pallet. Love was used 4 times sweeti in a rather short prose. Try and eliminate one more of them..I think all the rest is purrrfect and it is another one showing how far you have progressed since the first one you posted..
hugs TK
Comment Written 01-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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I have made the suggested changes TK. Could you take another look, if you please?!!
Thank you sweetie.
Always,
Missy
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Tried to give 6 up grade but for some reason
I can't..Both fixes I think were well worth the time Lady M..Thank you for taking my advice..Do think you have grown leaps and bounds my dear
HUGS
XXX
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Comment from G.B. Smith
Hey there Missy
I love the format of this one and the colors
I am all about bright colors
Your words of love exude from the page in
such a manner that the reader feels drawn into the center of your poetic heart
Bear
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Hey there Missy
I love the format of this one and the colors
I am all about bright colors
Your words of love exude from the page in
such a manner that the reader feels drawn into the center of your poetic heart
Bear
Comment Written 01-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 01-Sep-2015
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Big ol "bear" hug for ya, Bear :)
Thank you bunches!!! You know I love your work, so this coming from you means slot!
Always,
Missy