Tiny Tales of Terror
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Comment from ellie6
Great little horror story, the frightening bit is that Dad had a feasible explanation for all the ghostly stuff, but the girl in the mirror knew better.
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Great little horror story, the frightening bit is that Dad had a feasible explanation for all the ghostly stuff, but the girl in the mirror knew better.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2015
Comment from robina1978
As always a perfectly written horror story. Both photos look excellent and complement your story perfectly. Just moved to a new house the attack door is in your bedroom. You hear and later see things. Hungry vultures above you. You scream and your father did not see it, so gets killed.
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As always a perfectly written horror story. Both photos look excellent and complement your story perfectly. Just moved to a new house the attack door is in your bedroom. You hear and later see things. Hungry vultures above you. You scream and your father did not see it, so gets killed.
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Comment Written 06-Jul-2015
Comment from sweetwoodjax
ahhhhhh, the girl in the mirror
reaches for his neck.
unable to scream,
the dad says Oh heck.
she draws him
into her embrace.
his blood now drips
on jerry's face.
will mom come in
at a later hour?
will jerry's bed
smell a little sour?
from the urine he sprays
into his little bed.
I'm pretty sure dean
will mess with his head.....thanks for the screas....
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ahhhhhh, the girl in the mirror
reaches for his neck.
unable to scream,
the dad says Oh heck.
she draws him
into her embrace.
his blood now drips
on jerry's face.
will mom come in
at a later hour?
will jerry's bed
smell a little sour?
from the urine he sprays
into his little bed.
I'm pretty sure dean
will mess with his head.....thanks for the screas....
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Comment Written 06-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2015
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Ha-ha! Thank you for the poetic reply, Pam. It's very much appreciated. :)
~Dean
