Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Ginger, think I am still in shock...I love your truly wonderful poem...every word beautiful...I hope she comes home soon..FanStory...luff Linda xxoo love ya

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reply by the author on 31-May-2015

Not Ginger though Linda - Sharyn. Yes. I'm in shock too.

reply by l.raven on 31-May-2015

I am sooooooooooo sorry Sharyn...I know your name...long day...and getting longer...so sorry you...love ya xxoo

reply by the author on 31-May-2015

:) I've lived with worse honey!

Comment from JourneyHolm

Excellent

Another well written ode to Brooke. She seems to inspire beautiful words and phrases left and right. Thank you for sharing this poem. I've been enjoying the dandelion theme making its way through the hollowed halls of this site. This is another lovely addition.

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 31-May-2015

Thanks JH :)S

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi Sharyn, I am sure that your wonderful tribute to a wonderful lady will delight Brooke, Your fantastic sonnet is a beautiful way to pay homage to our friend, the excellent use of enjambment holds your beautiful words together my friend.

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 31-May-2015

Thank you Eric :)Sharyn

reply by Eric1 on 31-May-2015

You are welcome Sharyn

Comment from jlsavell

Excellent

Visionary1234, this is a stunning and moving sonnet in Brooke's honor. It's sentiment well understood by each and every one of us, knowing tomorrow brings no promises.

Your execution of this form is accomplished. I find sonnets intimidating, truly. Great enjambment lines to enhance the flow of this beautiful work..

jlsavell

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 31-May-2015

Thank you so much j! :)Sharyn

Comment from petalangela

Excellent

Yet a another loving a supportive poem for Brooke. A fitting tribute to one who spent so much time and loving patience giving her all. Hoping that she will be able to return if only for a while to read these missives and to smile

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 31-May-2015

Thank you petalangela! :)S

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

This is a sophisticated sonnet as well as being beautiful. I am sure Brooke would loveit. The progression through the stanzas is masterful with fascinating enjambement, even unto the final couplet.

The sentiments expressed in that final couplet, of pure joy are really great. Have a great dance.

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 31-May-2015

Let's all dance this one Pg! :)Sharyn

Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

I agree, nothing is ever secure in life, things can change so fast, we should live every moment to the fullest. Lovely imagery and rhyming to convey your sincere thoughts, dedicated to a friend of all on this site. We all wish her well. Good luck in the contest. Faye

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 31-May-2015

Thanks Faye! :)Sharyn

Comment from gazzagodbod

Excellent

I do miss her wnderful work shes an inspiration to be sure and im sure she'll love this poem well penned my friend xxgazzagodbodxx

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 31-May-2015

hey thanks gazza! :)S

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

This is absolutely lovely and I know Brooke will love it. Beautifully written and deeply moving. Excellent work with this one and I enjoyed it immensely.

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 31-May-2015

Thanks Sasha! :)S

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Sharyn,

What a nice poem for Brooke. I know she'll love it! I hope she'll start feeling better soon and can go back to writing her wonderful poetry too. Thanks for sharing this.

Kat

 Comment Written 31-May-2015

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reply by the author on 31-May-2015

Thank you Kat! :)S

reply by MizKat on 31-May-2015

You're welcome.