Comment from Jacob Collins

Exceptional

That certainly sent shivers down my spine, Dean. Now you've left me wondering, who is the young girl lying in her bed? What on earth will happen to her father? An exceptional piece of writing which I thought was well thought out and cleverly constructed. An excellent piece, Dean...Jacob

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2015

Thanks, Jacob, I sincerely appreciate that, my friend. What did you think of my intro? Is it too hokey? I hope it gives readers a sense of nostalgia, like those old radio shows or Rod Serling's classic television series, The Twilight Zone.

Thanks again, Jacob. I'm very grateful for your feedback. :} ~Dean

reply by Jacob Collins on 27-Mar-2015

I couldn't find where to play the recording, sorry I forgot to put that in the review but I'll take another look and see if I can find it...Jacob

reply by the author on 27-Mar-2015

It should have came on automatically, Jacob. I've set it on auto play. Maybe you just had your speakers turned off is all. Anyhow, it's not all that important. What is important is you felt the story was good, and that's good enough for me, LOL. ;)

Thanks again. ~Dean