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Nature's Show

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93 total reviews 
Comment from bayforesthimankush
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Yes, nature is abound with cinema shows; one can see a cinema show anywhere one looks. We the human behing is a cinema show. A bird flying, talking, singing is a cinema show to us. Thanks to mention in 3-5-3 poetry

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
    HI Bay, thank you so very much for a great review......I am so glad you like it...
Comment from Dawn Munro
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Ooooh my, I simply HAVE to tell you (with no disrespect to your very witty and charming poem), that the gorgeous artwork you chose and your lovely title are what drew me in - you not only penned sweet and clever poetry, you have a great eye! Best of luck in the contest. :)

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
    HI Dawn, thank you so very much sweetie for a great review...I am so glad you like it...and thank you for the best of luck...
reply by Dawn Munro on 10-Feb-2015
    Very much my pleasure!
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
    smiling...xxoo
reply by Dawn Munro on 10-Feb-2015
    :)
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
    smiling back at ya...xxoo
Comment from Dawny53
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Your image choice is absolutely stunning! It's perfect for this entry, your syllable count is right on target.. good luck to you, this really is a great entry!

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
    Hi Dawn, thank you so very much sweet girl for a wonderful review......I am so glad you like ...and thank you for your good luck...smiling
Comment from ravenblack
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And it is a cinema that I could just watch for days on end. I just wish more had the patience to truly view and reward Mother Nature with the Oscars she deserves.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
    HI Raven, so do I...thank you so very much for a great review...I am so glad you like it...God Bless
Comment from Alan K Pease
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Your poem as "beautifully viewed cinema" is also remarkable including a voice that arises from the picture that could be thought of as coming from the TV Channel OASIS which I watch frequently. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
    HI Alan, thank you so much for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...and thank you for your luck...smiling
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
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This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct line and syllable count - seems to always be the biggest hurdle LOL. You deliver a magical piece of imagery with your well chosen words and artwork. I wish you all the best in the voting and thank you so much for sharing this with me.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
    HI Angel, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...and thank you for your best...God Bless
Comment from thee-name
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Excellent 3- 5- 3. Writing was beautifully done.
NATURE'S SHOW
BEAUTIFULLY VIEWED
CINEMA

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
    Hi Thee-name, thank you so very much...I am so glad you like it...
reply by thee-name on 10-Feb-2015
    THANK YOU!
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
    smiling...xxoo
Comment from adewpearl
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lovely pairing of artwork and poem, which is in excellent 3/5/3 structure
You have a typo in viewed, which you've spelled veiwed
good imagery of nature as a cinema show for us
Brooke

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
    HI Brooke, thank you for the help you...so glad you like it...
Comment from giraffmang
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hi there,

this is absolutely lovely. A nice panoramic, cinemascope of imagery, written large in techno-colour. Sorry, couldn't help myself!

Love the idea of this.

one typo - viewed not veiwed

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
    Hi Gareth, WOW!!! thank you so much for a wonderful review...I am so glad you like it...I fixed it...shouldn't write poems with fevers...LOL...much less get in contest...LOL...thank you
Comment from royowen
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A great entry in this nature 3/5/3 poetic contest, it looks like a very worthy competitor, the artwork and the poem are a good combination in this composition, blessings, Roy.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2015

reply by the author on 10-Feb-2015
    Hi Roy, thank you so very much....so glad you like it...God Bless
reply by royowen on 10-Feb-2015
    My pleasure,